In My Dreams

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uh i wrote this thinking about how life could be different if we just tried to succeed but it doesnt always work....enjoy

In My Dreams

 

In my dreams

  I see a world of peace not war

  I see a world of love not hate

Flowers not guns

 

In my dreams

  I see people holding hands not fighting

  I see people singing not yelling

Writing not crying

 

In my dreams

  I see people living not dying

  I see kids smiling not frowning

Happiness not sadness

 

In my dreams

  I see everything that doesn't happen

A new world

  Of everything I imagine

But it is just a dream

 

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jj1562 commented on In My Dreams

10-05-2010

great emotion and all too true. though we never get to that we can still try to strive for it. if you strive for perfection you shall acheve greatness

winterkou commented on In My Dreams

09-21-2010

nice write full of emotion, really express the pictures you capture in a dream

Musicmynded1 commented on In My Dreams

08-30-2010

nice emotions to a great wrapping up type of ending... good work.

wiskeygirl5090 commented on In My Dreams

08-27-2010

this poem speaks a million words it gave me chills as i read it this mayb one of the best poems i have read in a long time thank you for sharing this wouldnt it be awsome if tis could be more then just a dream.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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