You Don't Know Me

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    hey...uh i wrote this poem about my dad because i never met him in my life....hope you like it

    You Don't Know Me

     

    You don't know me

    and I don't know you

    You're the person that left me so long ago

    and never bothered to check on me

    even though you made life hell for me

    by never being near

    I love you dad

    always and forever

    someday I will find you and we will meet

    for the first time

    I want to feel the bond

    of loving you

    and see what the other half of me is like

    Why did you leave?

    How come you never came back?

    You don't know me

    But I will always love you

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    bets commented on You Don't Know Me

    03-05-2011

    This is a really great. There's so much power behind it! -B.E.T.S.

    Krystle commented on You Don't Know Me

    11-02-2010

    This is AMAZING right to the point of how someone feels when their dad leaves their life.. I love it! Great work!

    Shadowblaze commented on You Don't Know Me

    10-26-2010

    whoa.AWESOME keyword AWESOME.JUST INSPURRATIONAL WORK OF ART

    CDWillams commented on You Don't Know Me

    10-05-2010

    This definitely tugs at the heartstrings. And with so few words. True power behind your pen my friend. Keep up the good writing.

    EthanEdward commented on You Don't Know Me

    10-02-2010

    Such few words but yet such great meaning. Poems like these are my favorite.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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