Boredom

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well me and my friend were bored so we wrote this poem....enjoy

Boredom

The worst disease there is

some may say its easy come

but not as easy to go.

There's not a shot for it.

Its guaranteed to strike anytime

and any place

but as for me this flu is my shadow

thus boredom always waits for us.

As I slowly drift out of this merciless disease

time starts to slow.

Nothing happens until

at last a cure must come.

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Sydney commented on Boredom

10-05-2010

very creative to write about boredom when youre bored. Fantastic poem. Sydney

edgarApoe10 commented on Boredom

10-04-2010

I liked this one. I tend to get bored so easily and this was a very creative way to talk about how it just randomly happens and how we must wait for some way to fix it... Great write!

BoomShakaLaka commented on Boredom

09-17-2010

cool i like it, i can picture myself staring outside a window on a snowy day

Chaos128 commented on Boredom

09-17-2010

Very contemporary and very existential! Sk8ter! You got skillz! : D

winterkou commented on Boredom

09-03-2010

boredom i know all too well, it is that disease that seems to linger at any given moment

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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