Sunshine Filled Raindrops

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    well i wrote this for my uncle that passed away on 1.24.10..he was a great person and i thought i'd write it...hopefully it shows..you decide

    Sunshine Filled Raindrops

     

    As day turns to night

    and rain starts to fall

    I think of you

    how you fell out of my life

    on that sad January day

    You died and left me alone in this cruel world

    But I realize it was for the better

    you were suffering

    Now you can be watching down on us

    and see how much we miss you

    and still love you

    For you were a guiding light

    a hand on my shoulder

    I see my future in your eyes

    and you see your past in mine

    the cannons fire in your honor

    you played a big part in my life and many others

    now night turns to day

    and the sun starts to shine

    I think of you

    how you are always in my heart

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    brokenhearted11 commented on Sunshine Filled Raindrops

    01-21-2011

    though the best line of this is repeated in another poem of yours, its still managing to be awesome. i was hooked by the title, as i usually am, and was glad where that title took me. keep writing!

    sk8erpoet

    01/21/2011

    yes i know...but that is one of my favorite lines to use...thank you

    lonewolf commented on Sunshine Filled Raindrops

    01-13-2011

    beautiful tribute to your uncle. i'm sure he'd be proud

    thecross commented on Sunshine Filled Raindrops

    12-06-2010

    "I see my future in your eyes and you see your past in mine" those lines are tremendous and add much substance well done and a beautiful tribute to your uncle

    jj1562 commented on Sunshine Filled Raindrops

    12-06-2010

    this is pure and true emotion some of the best poetry is based souly on that great write

    sk8erpoet commented on Sunshine Filled Raindrops

    11-19-2010

    well i put the wrong date in....it was supposed to be 1.12.10 sorry bout that haha

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