My Guiding Angel - a sestina-


Poem Commentary

Well i finally wrote again after a kind of long spell of writers block. dont know if its much good but enjoy anyway

My Guiding Angel - a sestina-

I need to find and angel

like those in my every dream.

For I need a light, I need a guide,

to help me with my journey.

My search for love,

my search for the truth.

All I find are lies when I look for the truth.

I need the laughter of an angel

to lead me to find love,

but maybe love is only something in a dream.

Still, I'm not going to quit on this journey.

I just have to find my guide.

There is someone in this world meant to be my guide,

but they don't understand the truth.

Everyday all I do is think about my journey.

There really is an angel,

if only in a dream,

and their heart is filled only with love.

Maybe I will never find love,

even if I do find a guide.

Maybe all this is only in a dream,

even the truth.

Still, I want to find an angel

and continue on my everlasting journey.

I will never come to the end of this journey,

but I will find love,

I will find an angel.

They will help me, and be my guide.

Maybe they will find the truth.

For once I will live my dream.

My dream,

my journey,

is to find the truth.

I need to find love,

I will, for I have my guide

by my side is an angel.

Find the angel, that is in your every dream

They will be your guide, on every journey.

Even the journey of love, the journey for the truth.





Poem Comments


Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

angelchaser commented on My Guiding Angel - a sestina-


You'll find your angel, honey. Who knows, I may even find mine, one day.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

sk8erpoet’s Poems (135)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Insane 0
So Right 1
Story in the Stars 1
Maybe 0
New Feeling 1
Her Secret 2
Peace 3
Who He Is 1
My Looking Glass 2
March 8, 2013 2
My Wish for You 1
Homeless 3
Something 3
His Story 1
Here Again 4
Red Ribbon 2
Choose Me! 1
Star-Crossed Lovers 2
Trying to Be Okay 1
Your Words 0
Free 0
Piece Of Paper 0
Dear Diary... 0
My "Sanctuary" 6
Cut Deep 4
Three 1
The Demons 3
Clueless 1
Everyone 3
What Do I Stand For? 1
Do You Remember? 4
Found In Flames 2
Me to My Dad 4
Hatred 1
The Girl Who Never Cares 1
The Lake 1
Love 1
On My Mind 1
Just An Angel 1
Only My Reflection 0
Only Be You 0
Any Other Way 0
She Finally Understands 0
Stop Pretending 0
No Rainbows 0
Dream 0
Not a Magic Ending 0
The Tree 1
emotions 0
Have You Seen Him? 0
Secrets 2
A Moment 2
Say... 1
Blue Eyed Angel 0
Closed 0
Real Smiles 0
What She Wants 0
The Clock Ticks 0
Not Coming Home 3
Living Proof 1
What Cancer Can Do 3
Please... 1
You Say/I Say 1
He'll See 0
I Don't Understand 0
Here I Am 1
Silent Screams 3
Words Not Spoken 0
Barely 0
Broken 0
Change... 2
Hope Dreams...and Me 0
Will Not 1
Too Late 1
The Last Time 0
That Song 1
Rainbow 1
Done 3
The Letter 3
Just Live 3
I Was Wrong 0
To My Son 0
He 1
That Child 0
That Child 0
Silence 1
A Dreamless Child 2
What is the Time? 1
She 0
Contentment 0
For the Ever-Dreaming Dead 0
It's Not True 1
Untitled 1
We've Been Through It All 2
My Guiding Angel - a sestina- 1
The Company of Nothing 1
A Better Life 1
Petals of Death 2
A Day in the Life 1
My Life 4
I Don't Know... 4
Mourning an Angel 4
Dream 6
Black 4
seven ways to look at a book 4
The Midnight Beauty- a pontoon 1
The Unknown Dream 2
Sorry Love 3
If Only...* 4
See 4
Who Am I Now? 5
The Bell... 7
The Chance 8
Sunshine Filled Raindrops 8
That Time 2
That Time 3
The Long Road 13
My Own Personal Demon - a sestina 6
It's Only Me 9
I Miss You 9
Blood and Tears 5
Boredom 7
In My Dreams 4
You... 5
You Don't Know Me 17
That Perfect Dreadful Day 4
Me 3
Dark Nights 5
I'm the Girl* 6
A Soldier's Eyes 8
Darkness 13
Life Is... 5
Beauty is... 6
Anywhere 3
Airplane 14