The Long Road

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well i wrote this while i was thinking.....i know it is short but oh well........enjoy

The Long Road

The end is near
and I feel many emotions pulsing through
my veins
I don't want to die
I don't want to live
the day will come when I can no longer decide
for my fate is written on my heart,
on stone
someday the road will disappear
leaving only me and the everlasting darkness
still the long road will only get longer
until I can see the sun
no longer

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hisyanna commented on The Long Road

12-08-2010

short poems are the best especially when theres so much feeling

lonelyboy77 commented on The Long Road

11-24-2010

"I don't want to die, I don't want to live."- favorite part of this poem. I feel the exact same way. Your a great writer!

DARKPOET113 commented on The Long Road

10-25-2010

honesty, realization. self denial becoming aware of more. very nice!

brokenhearted11 commented on The Long Road

10-25-2010

i love the way you put living and dying into one intertwining concept, it really explained it. great write and i wish to see more where it came from! keep writing :)

victoriandoll commented on The Long Road

10-19-2010

i love how you argue to yourself the concept of dieing and liveing a smart way to figure what you rlly want :3 very nice

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Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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