That Perfect Dreadful Day

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well i was bored as usual so i started to write .....again....enjoy i guess

That Perfect Dreadful Day

The sun is now going to hell

The moon is rising high,

Let me bid you farewell

Because soon I have to die.”

People kept saying those words to me

Right before they walked through the pearly gates,

They say those people are now free

But still it is too late.

I  will now be able to see

How that perfect day

Turned out for me

But that was the only way

Still that perfect day

Went dreadful in most everyway.

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Lillixfan14 commented on That Perfect Dreadful Day

08-23-2010

LOVE IT =) It kind of put an image in my head. Kind of a dark image but it really captured my attention. I rate a 10

Kyranna commented on That Perfect Dreadful Day

08-21-2010

love this poem [= It's really amazing and really caught my attention.

charmlessman2d commented on That Perfect Dreadful Day

08-06-2010

love love love the last stanza. and how you wrote it apart from the rest. great conclusion to the bittersweet rest of it. great poem kid! keep up the good work. my favorite is still lovebug.

bluepetal commented on That Perfect Dreadful Day

08-05-2010

short and snappy nice it works well and has nice flow with out any hiccups

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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