Life Is...

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i had to write this for school but i put my heart and soul into writing it..enjoy

Life Is...

 

Life is a never-ending stream

Just when you think it has ended,

You go around a bend

And it keeps on going.

 

Life is a book

Every word, every page,

Is your life

You just have to know how to read it.

 

Life is a storm

Darkening skies and lightening,

But then

Bright, sunny, cloudless skies lay ahead.

 

Life is a rose

Even with the thorns,

You have to treat is delicately

Otherwise you will crush your dreams.

 

Life is something

You need to fight for,

Even though there will be hard times

You can never give up on.......LIFE.

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PoetWithCancer commented on Life Is...

02-11-2011

Dear sk8terpoet, // Very impressive poem here. I chose to reaed this one because I have written a poem with the same title, but not posted yet. I'm going to post it today. // You have real talent, and more important, you can connect that talent to your heart. I wish you well, and expect great things from you, sister poet. // 10 from me. --Michael LP, Mr. Poet

PoetWithCancer

02/11/2011

P.S. How wise, and true, how gladly / sadly so, your message on your Profile Page is: "Time is gonna change everything..."

sk8erpoet

02/11/2011

thank you..you dont know how much it means to me getting a comment like that..thank you again.

SEVEN commented on Life Is...

08-19-2010

I totally agree with that last verse...."Life is something You need to fight for, Even though there will be hard times You can never give up on.......LIFE"...well put young lady.....kudos

bluepetal commented on Life Is...

08-05-2010

nice its like telling some one to walk lightly as you have layed there dreams under there feet

rainyxsun commented on Life Is...

07-14-2010

Good job.... This totally made me think about my life. I loved the 4th paragraph the most.

Sydney commented on Life Is...

05-31-2010

wow, you gave an excellent example poem. its really good. talking about what life looks like. that is really awesome how you described it. my favorite verse out of this is "Life is a rose Even with the thorns, You have to treat is delicately Otherwise you will crush your dreams." Sydney

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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