Mobile Cell phone

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Mobile Cell phone

Texting inattention
While driving your car
Conveyance of ownership
Taken for granted
Deliberation
On the road home
You’re on the phone
Premeditation unconscious thoughts
While cruising rolling
Makes' up some one demise
Contemplation
Of cell phone lands you in a Cell
Cell phone
Locked down
Put away
For accidental
vehicle Homicide
Your mobile phone
park it

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Musicmynded1 commented on Mobile Cell phone

08-25-2010

Nice flowing in your poems and message and or story always back there.

knight4696 commented on Mobile Cell phone

06-13-2010

Damn Right Blue!!!! :) What did we do before cell phones came along? Maybe listen to the radio - to drown out the noise of the day. Now people are texting and talking on the phone while driving - causing accidents and taking lives. Are we all so important that we must be able to be reached at any given notice? I can't stand talking on the phone and despise texting - both somewhat a necessity - but there is a time and place - and the Car is not one of them. Struck a chord with this one - can't ya tell? lol! :) Great write my friend! :) Ken

bluskyinthenite

06/13/2010

Ken thank you very much for taken the time to read my page... Cell phone madness where ever you go. People are talking on the phone bathroom are the worst. Have a wonderful Knight.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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