Memories of contentment

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Memories of contentment

I created my own existence

Prisoner in my mind

Lock down

Put away

Silently crying a river

Of pain-

In the concaves of my mind

Captive alone

In my perception

Of time

My mind is

Screaming a river of pain

Feeling Alone

Isolated and ashamed

At itself for being restless

Discontented

This moment in time

The Now

I miss you

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knight4696 commented on Memories of contentment

05-07-2010

Blue - Been there my friend! :) You have conveyed the angst and hurt in this piece .... Great work! :) Ken

bluskyinthenite

05/09/2010

Ken thank you....... My friend thanks alot

Narrator commented on Memories of contentment

04-25-2010

Lovely read... thank you for sharing! Loved the enjambment! Love the implications of lost or absent love side by side with a personal battle...

bluskyinthenite

04/29/2010

thank you very much for reading my poem.. much appreciated big time.... thanks

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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