Memories of contentment

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Memories of contentment

I created my own existence

Prisoner in my mind

Lock down

Put away

Silently crying a river

Of pain-

In the concaves of my mind

Captive alone

In my perception

Of time

My mind is

Screaming a river of pain

Feeling Alone

Isolated and ashamed

At itself for being restless

Discontented

This moment in time

The Now

I miss you

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knight4696 commented on Memories of contentment

05-07-2010

Blue - Been there my friend! :) You have conveyed the angst and hurt in this piece .... Great work! :) Ken

bluskyinthenite

05/09/2010

Ken thank you....... My friend thanks alot

Narrator commented on Memories of contentment

04-25-2010

Lovely read... thank you for sharing! Loved the enjambment! Love the implications of lost or absent love side by side with a personal battle...

bluskyinthenite

04/29/2010

thank you very much for reading my poem.. much appreciated big time.... thanks

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

bluskyinthenite’s Poems (60)

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Memories of contentment 2
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Steed of Steel 2
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Looking Glass 3
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Love Lost 1
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