Invisible

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why does it have to be so hard some times... to just be comfortable with another person... without having all the baggage of they're life affect you?

Invisible

I see the window melting
liquefying magnifying
disintegrating before my eyes

I'm invisible to you
Left without doubt
alone to pout

In front of the window pane
Of self doubt

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Krystle commented on Invisible

11-04-2010

This is amazing and wonderful all the way through! You are a very talented poet! I love reading your poems and I will read them over again sometimes too. I will also tell people about your work! Nice job thanks for sharing! I hope you have a blessed day

bluskyinthenite

11/06/2010

thank you very much

bluskyinthenite

11/22/2010

thank you sweetie... God bless you also

knight4696 commented on Invisible

09-07-2010

Blue - I love this metaphoric write .. You've described your feelings so well and in such few words .. to make one feel what you are feeling can be difficult itself .. never mind when you try to convey it in a couple lines. You convey so well! :) GREAT JOB! :) Ken

bluskyinthenite

11/06/2010

Ken thank you so much for reading my poems.. hugs

lorenzo commented on Invisible

08-30-2010

i love this little poem Blue Sky...it says so much with so few wonderfully well chosen words.

bluskyinthenite

11/06/2010

thanks you for reading thanks.. hugs to you

BlackButterfly1 commented on Invisible

08-30-2010

There's a lot of meaning in this short poem. A whole lot.

bluskyinthenite

09/01/2010

Disillusion with I love you Has broken us apart Beaks are very hard to go through alone. Ha thank you for reading my writes. much apprecitated

Aaros commented on Invisible

08-29-2010

I like the comparative quality of a window to invisibility. That to be invisible is still to be something or someone. I want more. :)

bluskyinthenite

09/02/2010

disillusioned with i love you . For it has torn us apart. Invisible I stay till dawns day break. thank you very much for checking me out

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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