Auto Pilot

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    Auto Pilot

    Auto Pilot

    Am I the pilot of my life, maker of my destiny? Auto Pilot comes and goes shifts out of control at the strangest times throughout my life.

    The upset of daily living can wear and tear if a ripple out of place doesn’t soothe the soul. I stiffeled my imperfections of emotions far to long.
    Do I like what I see, or even feel what I like
    diverge emotions pulling me apart am I delusional in thinking love is knocking at my door
    Am I delusional my heart wants to feel all the joy life has to offer do I dare open the door dust the cobwebs off my soul

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    Narrator commented on Auto Pilot

    04-25-2010

    Very rhythmic... a nice flow... love the idea behind the almost philosophical questioning...

    knight4696 commented on Auto Pilot

    03-12-2010

    Very nice write ... I think I've been on auto-pilot for quire some time. :) Nice job!

    bluskyinthenite

    03/13/2010

    I awoke to the sound of thunder,crashing,burning stumuch turning. Ran to the bathroom the flu the flu has taken its flight. Got some kind of stumuch bug. dang hope i feel better at work. Late night!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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