Drive By

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Put this poem up several times and tore it down... He dont like my poems.... But i Do

Drive By

Drive By

It’s okay it doesn’t matter

I know your they’re

Invisible mode

Computer Junkey

You’re a

Calculative

Scheming monkey

Push my buttons

Mr. Funky

You know I know

You’re invisible to me

It’s okay it doesn’t matter

Transparency from your candidness

Gives you ground

For pushing buttons

Playing games

It’s okay it doesn’t matter

Complications brings me down

I go round an round

Your little town

Instincts make me drive Bye

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knight4696 commented on Drive By

06-08-2010

Blue - This is quite humorous ... lol! :) I smiled all the way thru .. great word choices and the flow is excellent! Nice Job! :) Ken

bluskyinthenite

06/10/2010

thanks Ken... out of all my poems I think I like this one the best... Amost want to sing a long Ha

WordSlinger commented on Drive By

05-29-2010

lol, I cant even tell you in how I can relate to this, lol, love it, ty WS

bluskyinthenite

05/29/2010

so glad i made you laugh . I enjoy to make people laugh .. have a good one on me

SuSpence commented on Drive By

05-27-2010

This was to me both profound and humourous at times, a difficult combinations. I am glad to see you want to make this a song, I sensed a very lyrical quality while reading. Wonderful write blusky. ~Spence

bluskyinthenite

05/27/2010

thank you very much.

GUSTY commented on Drive By

05-26-2010

I'VE NEVER THOUGHT OF A BETTER WAY OF FORGETTING A CHEAT. I HATE CHEATS ! I LIKE YOUR WORK !!!

bluskyinthenite

05/27/2010

Thank you so much fpr reading my work.. thanks

Teardrops commented on Drive By

05-24-2010

When i write love poems i look at love in all different ways and this one stops even me . Loved it wish i had thought of it . Marie

bluskyinthenite

05/24/2010

Hey thank you very much... You have to drive by your loved one house and sit think and drive off with out even saying Hello.. drive bye. ... For a write like this to come to U. Thank you so so much for reading my Poem... I love poetry more so with each passing day. He confuses me so

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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