regretful sorrow

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    regretful sorrow

    Social butterfly
    I am not
    Words don’t come easy
    They’re difficult to grasp
    ~Awkward~
    Self consciousness
    Especially in social situations
    I some times wonder
    What made me Elusive
    Void of verses
    ~Empty~
    What a curse
    ~Anxiety~
    ~Worry~
    ~Fear~
    Bungle of sounds
    Escape my lips
    Hesitation
    I should have
    Big sigh
    Regretful sorrow

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    mustascheman commented on regretful sorrow

    05-03-2010

    This is a great expression of a personal feeling that a lot of people have. Well done.
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/07/2010

    thanks for checking me out

    Dano commented on regretful sorrow

    05-01-2010

    i often have trouble in social settings as well so this was very relatable for me... your expression is fantastic... nicely written
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/02/2010

    thank you very much

    WordSlinger commented on regretful sorrow

    05-01-2010

    like this, sometimes we dont have the words to say, and things get to far away, ty WS
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/02/2010

    thanks for reading my poem.... I think i'm getting the hang of it. I like to write. Thanks

    bluskyinthenite

    05/03/2010

    thank you very much for reading. I've noticed words people say and want to use them in my Poems. I love poetry more with each passing day.

    SuSpence commented on regretful sorrow

    05-01-2010

    Wonderful write, profiling social awkwardness haha, I loved it! I especially loved the use of the word 'Bungle', Love that word, not used often enough lol, Jolly good show Blusky. -Spence
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/01/2010

    Ohhh Starry Night.. thousand thanks...... much apprecitated

    xdavidabramx commented on regretful sorrow

    05-01-2010

    i love this poem. i've definitely felt like this before; it's something a lot of people can connect to on some level. definitely a 10.
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/01/2010

    oh thank you so very very much .. Makes me warm and happy that ya'll enjoy my poems

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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