Earth's satellite

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Earth's satellite

 

Earth's satellite

Incandescent radiant blue Moon

Moon worshiper true and true
Dreamy heavenly body
beautiful so original
Merciless orb escalating
Full Moon madness

Crafted crescent Moon amusing delight
shimmering drops of midnight blue
Silver ageless orb of night

Celestial body past and present
Romanticize bright Moon light

luminous shining on my naked body
I dance a dance of delightful enchantment
Mambo Lunar rotation
Earth's Satellite

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Musicmynded1 commented on Earth's satellite

08-25-2010

Sweet.. i knew i'd find your username in a poem somewhere here.

knight4696 commented on Earth's satellite

06-08-2010

Blue - A beautifully penned romantic poem .. I love the way you use the Moon as a stimulant. It is definately a mysterious planet that somehow can possess our moods, feelings and actions. Great write my friend! :) Ken

dahlusion commented on Earth's satellite

06-08-2010

Beautifully composed and delivered with much poetic romanticizing that tenderly leads the reader from beginning to end. Bravo!

Teardrops commented on Earth's satellite

06-05-2010

The moon has always been a planet of mystery , love . , This is a great poem and i Love the way it flows thanks Marie

bluskyinthenite

06/07/2010

Thanks Marie.... for taking the time to read my poems.. or writes... Its my friday... 3 days off yes!

MJG956 commented on Earth's satellite

06-05-2010

Oh, I like this poem very much! You hit My romantic spot,which is receded way down deep inside my meaty heart,never to never be unsolicitedly depart,from this mortaled body self,inside the brain and not ever to be dragged out by a coweing drunken Ogre or elf. A scientist might think of the moon as a satellite,so I am guessing here that You have an eye for beauty in Nature,as well as an eye for scientific toys that may or take flight in the day lit,or darkened space night. Good poem indeed was penned here..

bluskyinthenite

06/07/2010

I thank you very much for taken the time to read... Yes i have a eye for beauty .. not a scientist sorry... Just love the moon the moon loves me. we go together like swoon swoon.. to the moon alice.. ha

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

bluskyinthenite’s Poems (60)

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Break 2
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Nature 8
Imagine 2
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Son's Poem 3
Mobile Cell phone 2
Rock me baby 5
Nebie know more 4
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Total Eclipse 5
Earth's satellite 6
Memorial Day Weekend ~Fatality~ 7
You Don't know Me 9
Drive By 9
re: son's poem 3
RE: sons poems 1
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Nova 2
Twinkle In His Eye's 2
Put on hold 3
Shadow maker under me 2
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Cause and effect 2
regretful sorrow 2nd 2
Shards of ice pierce my heart 4
regretful sorrow 6
the chambers of insecurity 4
I'm to blame for this 2
Into the Universe 2
Memories of contentment 2
Meticulous Imperfection 3
Storms a brewing 5
My mental turmoil my madness 3
Sands of Time 3
Narcissus 3
Steed of Steel 2
Cranium 6
Life is Poetry 4
Looking Glass 3
Broken Wings 3
Lost 2
Echo's threw my mind 1
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Rest 1
Lost in the Mind 2
Love Lost 1
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No regrets 4
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Lonely for your touch 2
Rain on the Roof 2
Life’s small struggles 3
Auto Pilot 2