Sons Poem

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    Sons Poem

    See the ink move
    Embed with a point
    Flowing so comparatively
    To the images embedded

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    knight4696 commented on Sons Poem

    08-21-2010

    Simple and complete ... it amazes me how much you can convey with so few words! Blue - you do have some serious talent and are a force to be reckoned with. :) Ken

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Sons Poem

    08-08-2010

    oh that was a brilliant little write dear...one could feel the emotions captured in the embedded images......great one, thanks for the read loves ya asha

    GUSTY commented on Sons Poem

    08-08-2010

    I LOVE THIS POEM BECAUSE ONE CAN CLEARLY UNDERSTAND THE MESSAGE IT CARRIES!!! VERY LOVELY-MADE!!!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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