Son's Poem

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    My son got into poetry... When i had mentioned I am... I hope you enjoy his poem. Feel free to commit please... I will let him know what you think of his work... thank you very much for reading

    Son's Poem

    My I speak
    I am weak
    I need strength
    Strength I seek
    Surmount the past
    built in deep
    Key to balance
    Strength will sleep

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    knight4696 commented on Son's Poem

    08-23-2010

    Hey Blue - Sorry .. I also meant to say to tell your son .. to keep on writing .. he has a natural talent just like his Mom! :) AND you Blue .. Keep on writing! :) Ken

    bluskyinthenite

    08/24/2010

    thank you i will let him know

    knight4696 commented on Son's Poem

    08-21-2010

    Damn Blue ... Nice write once again! :) You never cease to amaze me .. and jt has got to get a life .. I don't know why she is so hung up on the pornography issue .. if children are reading it .. then it is the parents fault .. they need to monitor their kids activity .. if jt ha it her way - the whole site would be censored .. there goes freedom of speech and expression .. oh well enuff of my rant .. :) Great poem once again my friend! :) Ken

    jtlove commented on Son's Poem

    07-09-2010

    So how do you feel about the pornography posted on this site? You really want your son looking and reading the stuff? I have asked about the content warnings and 13 and 16 of Terms and Conditions where it says 0 tolerance for any sexually explicit material. It seems to be unmonitored most of the time and not taken seriously. So how do you feel about that as a parent? I don't like it. I care more about our youth than my own stupid sex agenda.

    bluskyinthenite

    07/10/2010

    I have no problem with the pornography. On this site.. I dont go there... Never give it my attention.. My son is 22 years old.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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