Shards of ice pierce my heart

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    Shards of ice pierce my heart



    I see the contempt in your eyes
    They’re dark
    ~obscure~
    ~leaden~
    Why do you want
    ~To do me like that~
    Pretentious Soul
    Are you lost
    I never laid eyes on you before
    I’m dreaming
    A night mare
    Of utter disgust
    ~Condescension~
    Penetrates the night
    Impact hits hard
    My wings unfold
    I take flight into the night
    Soaring high into the starry sky

    I awake to the sound of birds
    Singing a flawless song
    Giving Praise to a glorious
    New Day
    It was only
    A nightmare
    Thank God

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    knight4696 commented on Shards of ice pierce my heart

    05-07-2010

    Blue - I love your style ... you have such a unique way of conveying your thoughts ,, A fresh and creative write! :) Ken
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/07/2010

    Ken thank you very much... Very much appreciated....... shanks

    Rhymer commented on Shards of ice pierce my heart

    05-05-2010

    Always good to wake up and find out it was only a dream. 10 from me.
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/05/2010

    thank you Rhymer. much appreciated

    SuSpence commented on Shards of ice pierce my heart

    05-03-2010

    Haha, lovely write, I have had nightmares like this before. And I have certainly gotten that cold piercing look a few times in my day. Great expression, loved it. -Spence
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/03/2010

    thank you for reading.. much appreciated I'm telling you

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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