A Just Love (JL)

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Can one truly find love on this world and keep it for a eternity, for she is the one and no other will do.

A Just Love (JL)

Your love for me is the strength I need to make it day to day,

Your love is the sun I wake to and the moon I lay in your arms at night in,

Your love is the trust I place my heart in for you to hold as I do yours in return,

Your love is all these things and so much more,  In your vision I see our souls joined together as one,

There can never be and never will be another as you in my life, For life is what you have given me,

I have never known a love such as yours,  Till now.. I will never lose it,

For it means more than life to me itself, You are hope, Love and My soul,

You truly are my everything....................

Richard E. Cartledge    PHOENIX   1/4/10   (C)

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Jayandben commented on A Just Love (JL)

03-17-2010

Love is something I pray we are all able to embrace and some find difficult to obtain because they search too hard. I'm very glad you took it well

Teardrops commented on A Just Love (JL)

03-09-2010

true love is trust and does last a life time and beyond great poem my fiiend Marie

dahlusion commented on A Just Love (JL)

01-19-2010

"Your love is the trust I place my heart" The importance here is trust with all of ones heart. beautiful!

CatsMeow commented on A Just Love (JL)

01-15-2010

I liked the subject and the content; it is creative and enduring. I wish it were longer so as to continue to communicate, excite and elaborate on the actual story of this very passionate love.. Consider adding to it?

stellar commented on A Just Love (JL)

01-14-2010

I love reading this one...very sweet...Like im eating chocolate

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Phoenix9’s Poems (148)

Title Comments
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VISION OF LOVE 2
ALL THAT I HAVE LOST 0
The SIMPLEST TOUCH 2 2
ETERNAL SAND 3
I AM MADE OF LIGHT 2
SEVEN DEADLY LAYERS OF LOVE 3
I'M A COSMIC JOKE? 1
TIME AND CONCERNS 1
TASTE OF HEAVEN 2
THE SIMPLEST TOUCH 2
HARSH WORLD 4
STRUCK by LIGHTNING 4
SPIRAL 4
DEAD 13
MEMORIES of a TRANSPARENT MIND 13
DEATH BY LIFE 6
THEY SPEAK TO ME 3
DESPAIR 6
AND YET TO DIE 4
DRAGONFLY DOWNS 8
COUNTRY TIME (lyrics) 6
YET WHAT IF 7
OUR PROMISE TO THE FUTURE 6
DESMOND 3
QUESTIONS 8
A DELICATE TOUCH (JL) 6
QUESTIONABLE 6
FIVE SENSES OF LOVE 4
PAIN and YOU 3
WOMEN 2
BEYOND REASON 2
NO MATTER WHAT 2
Defying Gravity 1
BREAKING THESOUND BARRIER 2
BROKEN 1
THE INTERVIEW 2
IT'S NOT ME 3
DEPRESSION 4
COBWEBS 9
A LOST PARADISE ( A Fairies Tear ) 6
TOWER IN THE FOG 4
SPARKS 1
LIPSTICK AND SHADOWS 4
FLAT OUT OF TIME 1
BLACK ANGEL 5
SOUR MILK 9
A Just Love (JL) 9
BREATHLESS Version 3.0 (JL) 9
BREATHLESS Version 2.0 (JL) 5
BREATHLESS Version 1.0 (JL) 7
PERFECT PITCH 2
THE LAST PAGE 3
INSIGNIFICANT 7
LOSER 1
DARK THOUGHTS 3
HYSTERICAL AGONY 2
TERMINAL STUPIDITY 2
THE GREATEST POEM EVER WRITTEN 8
MIRROR IMAGE ??? 4
MONSTERS IN THE DARK 2
SNOW SURPRISE 7
STEEL LASHES 12
What we are 2
PREMONITIONS 4
AFTER HOURS 2
DESPERATE HOURS 2
Dead Flowers on the Wall 2
WHEN THE LIGHT GOES OUT 2
CRESCENT MOON 7
BEACON OF THE HEART 1
What Will We See 5
BOX 5
INTENSITY (JL) 21
THUNDERSTORM 21
ALONE 14
SUMMER comes AUTUMN 7
YET WHAT IF 13
MURDER 101 16
NOMAD pt. 3 5
NOMAD pt. 2 2
NOMAD pt. 1 2
The world is crying 13
DEVOURED (JL) 48
HERITAGE 14
Blood and Champagne (a vampires waltz) 12
PARASITES Pt. 2 & 3 4
PARASITES Pt. 1 3
Reflected 7
Two Worlds 3
SLEEPWALKING 16
some ones son named sam 4
TRUTH 9
NO ONE WANTS TO DIE 5
A LITTLE SHADOW 8
EVIL DOERS 2
A Presence of Being 6
To My Wife (JL) 7
MY NIGHTMARE 0
SILENT END 1
LAMBS 0
FRONT OFFICE BURNOUT 1
MOONLIT 3
All in a Second 10
Shhhh I Hear You 4
Here comes the Carnivores 10
Just a littleTerror 6
Walk on Water 8
Pray for a Nightmare 2
(JL) A Just Love 4
Muckrakers Sweet 0
To Die 4
My Thoughts 2
PLEASE COMMENT 3
Charred Remains 8
Idle Thoughts 7
Hmmmmmmmmm 2
Meaning of Life 5
Enter the myst 6
BROKEN CROSSES 7
DEEP DARK RED 3
To Have and Hold 6
DEAD ZOO 4
True Dreamer 4
Nightmare 14
What is life 4
Do You hear Me 5
Without Trees 19
In the Realm of Forgotten Love 7
Phoenix 12
GEMS 8
Of Love 6
Touch 10
Thoughts 6
A New Job 12
Hourglass 22
Hush 10
So Careless 3
Empty,Emotion
al,Thoughts, Heart and Soul
4
WHISPER 13
Shed a Tear 6
THREE WINDOWS 6
Camel on Ice 8
Destiny's door 10
Laugh and Point 12
Love Prevails 9
Worry Free and Gay 28
Never Enough 19
where do I go 94