PLEASE COMMENT

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    PLEASE COMMENT
    We aspire to heights that make us dizzy,
    We long to hear yours words, Your feelings,
    We walk on clouds, Only to peer down to see your words,
    It makes us stronger, Better, To know we did good,
    Or to help us find our flaws, To fix our weakness,
    We take our favorite pen, Or #2 pencil,
    We create a world within our own, We color it with life,
    For others to enjoy, For others help us dream,
    When we create, It's for us, Then to the world we share,
    Hope and dreams for all to see,
    Touching one life or more with meaning is our dream,
    Knowing keeps us going,
    So with all said and done, All we really ask for is,
    Please comment....................................................

    5/3/09 Richard(PHOENIX)Cartledge (c)


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    bigbluepoet commented on PLEASE COMMENT

    05-07-2009

    There is no doubt that all who pen words are trying to understand themselves and others by writing our thoughts down. This is a creative way of looking at our own inner desires and openly admitting our dreams. A nice piece.
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    raggedypoet commented on PLEASE COMMENT

    05-04-2009

    Very well written and oh so true!! ~ Sara
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    StandingBear commented on PLEASE COMMENT

    05-04-2009

    We write, we dream. We dream when we write. A plateau we escape to in the clouds. Great write.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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