DEVOURED (JL)

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DEVOURED (JL)

My love is a hunger, A thirst,   That will not end,
I can not find peace until I am with you,  Part of you,
My will is lost,  Control is beyond my reason,
For you are my only reason,
Hunger is in your eyes too,
I am consumed in your vision,  In your heart,
We can not put out the flames,
For together we are the Fire,  That burns forever,
Igniting two souls, You and I,
Until everything around us is ash,
Still the hunger grows,  Devours,
I taste it upon your lips, Your fingertips, Your breast,
The way you tremble at my slightest touch,
My breath upon your neck, A caress of your thighs,
Too gaze into your eyes, Looking deep,  Finding heaven,
Finding love in every tear drop,
A love I hold in my arms, Hunger in every kiss,
We love, We feed, We devour,
Each other in every way.......................

Richard(PHOENIX)Cartledge   8/13/09  (c)
   (JL)    "a just love"

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jamie7121f commented on DEVOURED (JL)

11-30-2010

Great Job! I love the passion......................................................

redbloodink commented on DEVOURED (JL)

12-20-2009

nice write.... very passionate... may you find it!!!!!!!! Red

Kaylyn commented on DEVOURED (JL)

10-08-2009

Very good i love the image it brings to mind......

WordSlinger commented on DEVOURED (JL)

09-07-2009

I love the looking deep part, thats the special gaze, for sure, Phoenix, I like this, A great poem to set someone on fire for, sweet it is..

Madelynn commented on DEVOURED (JL)

09-07-2009

This is beautiful.So tastefully written,yet with just the right amount of sexuality,to give this piece a desired presence.There were actually certain lines that were just-breathtaking,bringing romance to linger on the senses.-I loved this part-Finding love in every tear drop, A love I hold in my arms, Hunger in every kiss, We love, We feed, We devour, Each other in every way...~That is just the stuff a -sigh!-is made of! LOL!Thank you for inviting me to read this piece!-Im going to ask a special person, to read this!I know he'll love this!-thanks.

Phoenix9

09/07/2009

Thank you, I am glad you liked it, its how I view things for real.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

Phoenix9’s Poems (148)

Title Comments
Title Comments
VISION OF LOVE 2
ALL THAT I HAVE LOST 0
The SIMPLEST TOUCH 2 2
ETERNAL SAND 3
I AM MADE OF LIGHT 2
SEVEN DEADLY LAYERS OF LOVE 3
I'M A COSMIC JOKE? 1
TIME AND CONCERNS 1
TASTE OF HEAVEN 2
THE SIMPLEST TOUCH 2
HARSH WORLD 4
STRUCK by LIGHTNING 4
SPIRAL 4
DEAD 13
MEMORIES of a TRANSPARENT MIND 13
DEATH BY LIFE 6
THEY SPEAK TO ME 3
DESPAIR 6
AND YET TO DIE 4
DRAGONFLY DOWNS 8
COUNTRY TIME (lyrics) 6
YET WHAT IF 7
OUR PROMISE TO THE FUTURE 6
DESMOND 3
QUESTIONS 8
A DELICATE TOUCH (JL) 6
QUESTIONABLE 6
FIVE SENSES OF LOVE 4
PAIN and YOU 3
WOMEN 2
BEYOND REASON 2
NO MATTER WHAT 2
Defying Gravity 1
BREAKING THESOUND BARRIER 2
BROKEN 1
THE INTERVIEW 2
IT'S NOT ME 3
DEPRESSION 4
COBWEBS 9
A LOST PARADISE ( A Fairies Tear ) 6
TOWER IN THE FOG 4
SPARKS 1
LIPSTICK AND SHADOWS 4
FLAT OUT OF TIME 1
BLACK ANGEL 5
SOUR MILK 9
A Just Love (JL) 9
BREATHLESS Version 3.0 (JL) 9
BREATHLESS Version 2.0 (JL) 5
BREATHLESS Version 1.0 (JL) 7
PERFECT PITCH 2
THE LAST PAGE 3
INSIGNIFICANT 7
LOSER 1
DARK THOUGHTS 3
HYSTERICAL AGONY 2
TERMINAL STUPIDITY 2
THE GREATEST POEM EVER WRITTEN 8
MIRROR IMAGE ??? 4
MONSTERS IN THE DARK 2
SNOW SURPRISE 7
STEEL LASHES 12
What we are 2
PREMONITIONS 4
AFTER HOURS 2
DESPERATE HOURS 2
Dead Flowers on the Wall 2
WHEN THE LIGHT GOES OUT 2
CRESCENT MOON 7
BEACON OF THE HEART 1
What Will We See 5
BOX 5
INTENSITY (JL) 21
THUNDERSTORM 21
ALONE 14
SUMMER comes AUTUMN 7
YET WHAT IF 13
MURDER 101 16
NOMAD pt. 3 5
NOMAD pt. 2 2
NOMAD pt. 1 2
The world is crying 13
DEVOURED (JL) 48
HERITAGE 14
Blood and Champagne (a vampires waltz) 12
PARASITES Pt. 2 & 3 4
PARASITES Pt. 1 3
Reflected 7
Two Worlds 3
SLEEPWALKING 16
some ones son named sam 4
TRUTH 9
NO ONE WANTS TO DIE 5
A LITTLE SHADOW 8
EVIL DOERS 2
A Presence of Being 6
To My Wife (JL) 7
MY NIGHTMARE 0
SILENT END 1
LAMBS 0
FRONT OFFICE BURNOUT 1
MOONLIT 3
All in a Second 10
Shhhh I Hear You 4
Here comes the Carnivores 10
Just a littleTerror 6
Walk on Water 8
Pray for a Nightmare 2
(JL) A Just Love 4
Muckrakers Sweet 0
To Die 4
My Thoughts 2
PLEASE COMMENT 3
Charred Remains 8
Idle Thoughts 7
Hmmmmmmmmm 2
Meaning of Life 5
Enter the myst 6
BROKEN CROSSES 7
DEEP DARK RED 3
To Have and Hold 6
DEAD ZOO 4
True Dreamer 4
Nightmare 14
What is life 4
Do You hear Me 5
Without Trees 19
In the Realm of Forgotten Love 7
Phoenix 12
GEMS 8
Of Love 6
Touch 10
Thoughts 6
A New Job 12
Hourglass 22
Hush 10
So Careless 3
Empty,Emotion
al,Thoughts, Heart and Soul
4
WHISPER 13
Shed a Tear 6
THREE WINDOWS 6
Camel on Ice 8
Destiny's door 10
Laugh and Point 12
Love Prevails 9
Worry Free and Gay 28
Never Enough 19
where do I go 94