SUMMER comes AUTUMN

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    SUMMER comes AUTUMN

    Spinning in circles through cycles of seasons,
    Dancing in the wind, Floating on a breeze,
    Rolling down a hill making a wide path,
    Smiling from above while flying in the clouds,
    Sprinkles of cinnamon flavor your tastes,
    All rolled in a ball crashing through leaves,
    Standing up straight to look over fields,
    Running through fields of wheat,
    Whispering like the wind in golden waves,
    Watching butterflies paint daises in pastel splendor,
    Skipping stones through crashing waves,
    Sinking in wet sand up to your knees,
    Hiking up dunes for all to see,
    Swinging from vines tree to tree,
    All the leaves of color are changing,
    Getting it done before it all stops,
    Soon winter approaches, Cometh the cold,
    Huddled in front of fires, Drinking hot cider,
    Summer is gone, Fall is falling away,
    Sun hides for a season, We all wait,
    Spring will be upon us again, The cycle comes back around to start all over one more time.....

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    PamelaALamppa commented on SUMMER comes AUTUMN

    10-07-2009

    The cycle of seasons, brilliant in textures and colors, temperatures changing and thoughts to contemplate. How quickly time passes. This is a lovely take on an age old topic, filled with color and imagery. Very nice. ~Pamela

    Photojan12 commented on SUMMER comes AUTUMN

    09-27-2009

    Well done. It all goes so fast in glorious moments and memories and you made me feel that as I read your poem.

    ginga commented on SUMMER comes AUTUMN

    09-21-2009

    Phoenix, This is an action packed poem that is vibrant and exciting. The verbs are strong and the reader can feel the seasons spinning from one to another. ginga

    Mandi commented on SUMMER comes AUTUMN

    09-21-2009

    I love the fall and your writing reminds me of all the reasons why. With exception of the waves crashing ( I have never experienced the oceans) everythingyou mention brings me closer to my perfect desire. Keep writing , I love it.

    lindabrito commented on SUMMER comes AUTUMN

    09-16-2009

    I loved this one, it was so great!!! I am new at this, and can't wait till I get that great.

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