where do I go

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    where do I go

    Everywhere I look, Everything I see
    Passing thru life, As life passes thru me.

    I think,I know, It should have been,
    A place, A thing, Two steps ahead,
    I couldn't help, I just can't see,
    Where life takes me I just can't be.

    Round I go, I can't breath,
    Feel my heart about to burst,
    I see the world as it stares at me,
    It makes me sick, everyone can see.

    Hide in a corner, Hide in plain sight,
    In the middle of a crowd, no one see's,
    I walk and talk, I yell real loud,
    No one looks,No one cares, No ones there.....

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    bluskyinthenite commented on where do I go

    03-23-2010

    I liked your poem. I too can be invisible in plan site. I just have that type of personality. I guess.

    frog commented on where do I go

    12-31-2009

    So much fear expressed here. I think many of us share these feelings that you expressed well here.

    Teardrops commented on where do I go

    11-30-2009

    the poem is wonderful dark, sad and beautiful love the read thanks

    sol3runette commented on where do I go

    11-12-2009

    I like it; it's interesting and you can feel the pain in your tone you can hear the emptiness, it's all so real, it's something I can relate to if you have read any of my poems. The part I like the most is "Hide in a corner, Hide in plain sight." That part is making it seem like no matter where you are everyone is just going to look right through you and not listen to a thing you have to say. I must admit this is one of my favorites.

    Singing commented on where do I go

    11-12-2009

    why so depressed? maybe some day we feel sad, but most of the time and life , we should be happy and active. So , Rick, please cheer up!

    Phoenix9

    11/12/2009

    I wrote that long ago, during some dark days, am doing so much better now, thanks for the concern

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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