INTENSITY (JL)

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INTENSITY (JL)

Moonlight shines through the window,
Pass the curtains, Onto the bed,
It touches our bodies, Radiantly we glow,
Our eyes lock,   A look so intense,
A fire that smolders,  Seconds to rekindle,
Passion fanned flames of lust erupt as we touch,
The embers in our eyes glow brighter,
Softly our lips brush, Sending tingles,
From head to toe, Like electricity,
Again we kiss, Sparks fly, Shocking the night,
Tracing the outline of  your body with my every breath,
Like a silent whisper on your skin, soft and fragrant,
Tracing the contour of your breast,  To your tummy,
Then to the sleek inner thighs, To linger, To kiss,
Into the inner deepness, Inner warmth,
Between skin soft as silk, Moist, Sensitive to a touch,
Unfathomable depths I cherish, Emotions so raw,
Heat of our love seems to melt us into one,
We share the moment, We share each other,
We share,.............With such........INTENSITY.

Richard Cartledge   PHOENIX        10/28/09   (c)



 

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sway commented on INTENSITY (JL)

11-13-2009

very touching and so true of love and the feeling of touch liked it alot

pirites commented on INTENSITY (JL)

11-06-2009

Very Sensual and tenderness that segues to erotic intensity

Phoenix9

11/06/2009

Glad you liked it, thanks for the comment

Gramma2 commented on INTENSITY (JL)

11-02-2009

It took my breath away, rekindling moments I have had, aching with the most exquisite passion. I especially resonated with "heat of our love seems to melt us into one" Really hot poem

SavVySam commented on INTENSITY (JL)

10-31-2009

You've captured and conveyed magical moments of shared beauty within your work! Very smooth intensity!

Singcanary commented on INTENSITY (JL)

10-31-2009

passion and intensity captured in the contour of your actions and thoughts. "Tracing the outline of her body with your warm breath...yummy! LOL sorry, I will behave myself. Well done my friend. Good to see you back... every experience is a poem. love the photos too.

Phoenix9

10/31/2009

thank you and glad you liked the poem, more coming, now that i am back, it seems my muse is also more intense as to my poetry

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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I'M A COSMIC JOKE? 1
TIME AND CONCERNS 1
TASTE OF HEAVEN 2
THE SIMPLEST TOUCH 2
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DEATH BY LIFE 6
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DESPAIR 6
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OUR PROMISE TO THE FUTURE 6
DESMOND 3
QUESTIONS 8
A DELICATE TOUCH (JL) 6
QUESTIONABLE 6
FIVE SENSES OF LOVE 4
PAIN and YOU 3
WOMEN 2
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NO MATTER WHAT 2
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THE INTERVIEW 2
IT'S NOT ME 3
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A Just Love (JL) 9
BREATHLESS Version 3.0 (JL) 9
BREATHLESS Version 2.0 (JL) 5
BREATHLESS Version 1.0 (JL) 7
PERFECT PITCH 2
THE LAST PAGE 3
INSIGNIFICANT 7
LOSER 1
DARK THOUGHTS 3
HYSTERICAL AGONY 2
TERMINAL STUPIDITY 2
THE GREATEST POEM EVER WRITTEN 8
MIRROR IMAGE ??? 4
MONSTERS IN THE DARK 2
SNOW SURPRISE 7
STEEL LASHES 12
What we are 2
PREMONITIONS 4
AFTER HOURS 2
DESPERATE HOURS 2
Dead Flowers on the Wall 2
WHEN THE LIGHT GOES OUT 2
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BEACON OF THE HEART 1
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BOX 5
INTENSITY (JL) 21
THUNDERSTORM 21
ALONE 14
SUMMER comes AUTUMN 7
YET WHAT IF 13
MURDER 101 16
NOMAD pt. 3 5
NOMAD pt. 2 2
NOMAD pt. 1 2
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DEVOURED (JL) 48
HERITAGE 14
Blood and Champagne (a vampires waltz) 12
PARASITES Pt. 2 & 3 4
PARASITES Pt. 1 3
Reflected 7
Two Worlds 3
SLEEPWALKING 16
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TRUTH 9
NO ONE WANTS TO DIE 5
A LITTLE SHADOW 8
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To My Wife (JL) 7
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LAMBS 0
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Idle Thoughts 7
Hmmmmmmmmm 2
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Enter the myst 6
BROKEN CROSSES 7
DEEP DARK RED 3
To Have and Hold 6
DEAD ZOO 4
True Dreamer 4
Nightmare 14
What is life 4
Do You hear Me 5
Without Trees 19
In the Realm of Forgotten Love 7
Phoenix 12
GEMS 8
Of Love 6
Touch 10
Thoughts 6
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Hourglass 22
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