NO ONE WANTS TO DIE

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NO ONE WANTS TO DIE

No one wants to die, No one at all,
No one has to suffer like this, No one,
Release me from this pain I feel,
No one trys too die, No one has to die,
No one wants to die alone, No one,
When you are not around me, I feel so empty,
When I can't hold you, When your not here,
I have no life ,I felt death upon me,
I wanted to die, Yet knowing,
I found love, I found life, I found you,
No one wants to die, No one has to die,
No one, No one at all.............

Richard(PHOENIX)Cartledge  (c) 7/09   

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LenaMP commented on NO ONE WANTS TO DIE

09-07-2009

Beautiful sentiment. No one should have to die alone without a true friend or lover to hold them. We need that connection before we travel to the next plain. You have captured this emotion skillfully.

gorgeousjhann commented on NO ONE WANTS TO DIE

07-12-2009

so nice poem my love! love u so much... take care!

Troubador commented on NO ONE WANTS TO DIE

07-11-2009

I am a realist, Your poetry seems to unleash a dangerous fantasy. Sure your composition is well written and all, however it does ring with a sense of impossibility. People have died from time immemorial and they will keep on experiencing death no matter how long we live. A better title would be pipe dream.

PoetWithCancer

07/16/2009

Troubador--great name! I'm jealous ; ) Phoenix9, I believe, was using death as a metaphor to describe how he feels when his love is away. Besides, even if he meant literal death, he was only saying no one WANTS to die--he didn't say no one HAS to die.

Phoenix9

07/12/2009

its a love poem of sorts, sorry you missed the point

am2anangel commented on NO ONE WANTS TO DIE

07-11-2009

very thought provoking and real. Your passion for your love is evident. And love can cause such pain when not returned. Well done. I enjoy your work.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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