BREATHLESS Version 3.0 (JL)

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BREATHLESS Version 3.0 (JL)

Because we can make dreams a reality,
We find that love is intoxicating,
Being breathless is a state of being,
Of passions flame,  It take the air away,
For we can not stop what we began,
We are drenched in the sweat of hours,
For we have lost track of time, That never ends,
We breath in our love,  Sweet to the taste,
Our bodies form as one,  Still we want more,
We reach the dizzy heights, Delirious, Only to start again,
We sigh with every move,  Holding on tighter,
With every thrust,  Every gasp for air,
Our love consumes us till finally we lay still,
Staring into heaven, Trying to breath,
For the flames of love have left us,
          Breathless.............

Richard E. Cartledge    PHOENIX   (c)  1/3/10
A JUST LOVE SERIES  (JL)  

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Teardrops commented on BREATHLESS Version 3.0 (JL)

03-09-2010

well written and discribes love the passion and pleasure and love for allof time thanks Maire

bloomingsun commented on BREATHLESS Version 3.0 (JL)

01-20-2010

a beautiful expression of love's passions. well written and full of great images. such intoxication is worth a poetic tribute!!

Niecy commented on BREATHLESS Version 3.0 (JL)

01-12-2010

THE INDWELLED SENSATION OF THE HAPPENING MOMENT, MIND TO THOUGHT ~ TOUCH TO FEEL ~ EXUBERENT APPEAL! EXCELLENT WRITE!

dahlusion commented on BREATHLESS Version 3.0 (JL)

01-06-2010

So deeply rich in the art of love, sensuality, and creation.

Mareann commented on BREATHLESS Version 3.0 (JL)

01-05-2010

Your poem leaves me breathless for more-- This is such artistic beauty, not many can write love poetry with this much conviction. You did a beautiful job on your poem, thanks for sharing-- Mary

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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ALL THAT I HAVE LOST 0
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ETERNAL SAND 3
I AM MADE OF LIGHT 2
SEVEN DEADLY LAYERS OF LOVE 3
I'M A COSMIC JOKE? 1
TIME AND CONCERNS 1
TASTE OF HEAVEN 2
THE SIMPLEST TOUCH 2
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QUESTIONABLE 6
FIVE SENSES OF LOVE 4
PAIN and YOU 3
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NO MATTER WHAT 2
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IT'S NOT ME 3
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TOWER IN THE FOG 4
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BREATHLESS Version 2.0 (JL) 5
BREATHLESS Version 1.0 (JL) 7
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THE LAST PAGE 3
INSIGNIFICANT 7
LOSER 1
DARK THOUGHTS 3
HYSTERICAL AGONY 2
TERMINAL STUPIDITY 2
THE GREATEST POEM EVER WRITTEN 8
MIRROR IMAGE ??? 4
MONSTERS IN THE DARK 2
SNOW SURPRISE 7
STEEL LASHES 12
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NOMAD pt. 2 2
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DEVOURED (JL) 48
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Blood and Champagne (a vampires waltz) 12
PARASITES Pt. 2 & 3 4
PARASITES Pt. 1 3
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Two Worlds 3
SLEEPWALKING 16
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TRUTH 9
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A LITTLE SHADOW 8
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Shhhh I Hear You 4
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Idle Thoughts 7
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Enter the myst 6
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Touch 10
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