I've Said enough to Know

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  • Altair
  • Don't read me, I am not that good.......

I've Said enough to Know

It seems that the idea of life is to live as the tree
plush upon those spheres that wander me
who am I to seek the answers of tears randomly
in the eyes of the brown eyed girl, eternity.
Hey my love from depths of my covets 
I beseech you, the black dove restoring my focus
as your smile radiates as rain twinkles the lotus
the moon choose us to trickle constantly to fulfill such
What....?

When metaphors line the void of it all, the precipice stalls
.....hanging on for dear life the cliff recalls
the moment of clarity in sunset's applause
as I look at you, lying there with no clothes on.
The rhyme chills down my spine in ripples
as the waves of emotion crash this venue
I'm into you. Love was the future, who new?
No one, I always knew you were it. Am I too Cool?
Yes....

Amen-Ra, Jah is the cutest things, huh?
A perfect blend of you and me, did we call it or what?
A little laxed in this symphony my mind gives out
As the end is nearing the beginning, we want a house.
All stars aligned the file with you behind
Against all odds we entertained a sublime
arc that keeps shooting up new paradigm
and we explode into another universe.
Trying....

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dahlusion commented on I've Said enough to Know

09-20-2018

"the black dove restoring my focus as your smile radiates as rain twinkles the lotus" this is such a fine line, and this: "the cliff recalls the moment of clarity in sunset's applause", and "and we explode into another universe" –– simply superb poetry ––))

Altair

09/28/2018

Always a pleasure to have my thoughts viewed by someone with great insight. Thank you as always for visiting my humble page Dah.

Allseasonsverse commented on I've Said enough to Know

08-31-2018

Altair, this is magnificent your imagery, your rhythm, and metaphors Flawless and so creative, intriguing my friend. I'm captivated by this write. Superb !

Altair

09/05/2018

Thanks for reading Allseasonsverse

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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