An instant revelation of…

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  • Altair
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An instant revelation of…

 

There is a subtle reminder to life
I hold dear to me
As lies turn to the truth
I remain free
I hold the winds constant voice of motion in hand
One grain of sand cause a life to expand
One instance one resistance to faith of others
but behold the truth in a mind that smoothers
Reasons of thought when rapture reappear in a mirror
then disappear in jeer of my spirit endeavor
Nature, life, one beholds the pith
that upends the blessed to soul enrichment
Lets share in a view so commonly new
a mindful consent reach a casual few
Appreciation of everything, gift of life  
I behold my own spirit, then reflect on it's strife

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knight4696 commented on An instant revelation of…

04-08-2010

Altair - The metaphoric master strikes again! :) Nice work ~ A short poem - but yet so filled with self reflection. Very Nice!! :) Ken

Altair

04/08/2010

you flatter me all to well, but don't stop it brings a smile in appreciation..stay tuned I have been savoring the views of the master musician...

Marsink commented on An instant revelation of…

04-08-2010

This is quite a grand treatment of introspection! (inclusive of the perception of others) Reminds me of someone who I don't really know well, but enjoyed their writing. You have blanked an array of emotion to uncover each in candor and descript images for the reader to discover in empathy!

Altair

04/08/2010

mars, if you recall the comment on your profile from the first question, you shall find within yourself that your inquiries are fruitive in thought..it is I you think to believe so. Thank you so much for your comment, always enjoyed your inclusion as well as your expressions...

Madelynn commented on An instant revelation of…

04-06-2010

One grain of sand cause a life to expand-Love this! I have a piece I wrote with the same concept as this one line.So very true.-I love the intensisty and deep thought you displayed in this write..it seems you are a very deep thinker mystery poet!-Key ingedients to master writing..I look forward to reading this work. -Maddi

Altair

04/06/2010

thanks for accepting my friend request and indulging in my expression as well, it's the second prose to a series of three, the third is coming soon, glad you like it...

SuperChick76 commented on An instant revelation of…

04-06-2010

And I am now all caught up. I'm so proud of me. haha. This one seems almost parallel to the last, with differences of course, but, seems to remind me of it. It was, indeed, a favored read. The last line was a real nice finishing touch. Good write, good read. :)

Altair

04/06/2010

you are right prodigy for this is the second part to a three poem series so to speak that I wrote, I have yet to post the last one but it is coming..

Musicmynded1 commented on An instant revelation of…

04-05-2010

I like the fabric that you used to sew this, and then there is of course the gown:)

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

Altair’s Poems (53)

Title Comments
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?....? 0
The Builder refused 0
To be my most recent thought 1
I've Said enough to Know 2
I've Said Enough to Mean 2
Just because I like Trees 2
Contemptuous Nonchalance 2
Unearthly Manifest... 2
Like Water for Dark Chocolate.... 2
Impenitent Soliloquy 3
Figurative Meadow... 1
Windows 1
In jam meant to be... 2
Upon My "Death" 5
The Butterfly Effect Set … 4
The Quiet Storm Enters A Room... 2
The Diamond Age of Yesternight..
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2
A Choir of Angels are We in Poetry.... 10
Dear Love, by the time you manifest this poem, you'll be gone..... 10
On Hallows Eve, Hollow grief as Death I Foresee......
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12
From blood, death darkens to stone's manifest.....
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9
The Forest is a Journey In my Darkness complete.... 10
The Wrath of My Titan Enlightenment
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7
Unisyghtcles.
..whatever that is...
9
Failure of my trinity...lea
ked was in sanity.
4
A soul is loss....seeks an endless remorse.. 10
Madness exist in her gift..... 7
The London Show at the Tate's Estate.......
.Part two adieu
9
The London Show at the Tate's Estate.......
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11
I'm Back.... 7
A Warped View of My Inner Sanctum...... 4
What do I see? What do you believe? 9
Lacking in Madness...... 14
Elemental portance in alchemic relevance.. 9
The Calamity of Conformity...
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13
The Vicarious Rues..... 6
Within this Quill, manifest on the Canvas....Art 8
A Voiding thought is all I sought.... 4
Pushing away the loving Void....... 10
Vessels of ash, Souls thus passed... 4
The Infinite battle from Night to Light....... 5
Trick or treat in the Streets of hollowed teens..... 5
Untitled Breaths... 11
Kharon was the fairest of guides to my fruition.....
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16
The inevitable of lovers in dreams.... 5
If I could trap you in my vigil.... 3
I emit my lah... 2
An instant revelation of… 7
The crossroads of..... 3
How things change in a moment..... 4
How Angels and Human Inclinations are One...... 5
Frailty begets Strength...C'
est la vie...
5
The conquest..... 11