The inevitable of lovers in dreams....

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    • Altair
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    A mixture of dream and realism..moments of both correlating anomalies in the surface and depths of my life...

    The inevitable of lovers in dreams....

     

     

    I lie my head on the lotus petals
    only to falter into a dream of the one, Eurydice'
    A fair female, hair dark, eyes oceans in carousels
    I’m the unseen in my dream, but she stares at me
    Mesmerized I Incline  on my ultimate power of sun rise divined
    of my internal prime, external to the sublime.
    Eurydice', smiling with rose scented attraction
    majestic actions I have fallen in passion
    I confess to you, in true renaissance
    I will follow you to the ends and beyond
    How so it feels like I’ve known you beyond a life
    a parallel relic to such a beautiful presence
    thoughts of your essence in my Eager suggestions.
    Women like you, more than leave an impression
    one day to supplant my mind and body
    I smile at the notion and welcome it freely
    transcendence upon you is all I imagine
    I the tragic hero, you my phantasm.
    Such a gesture, in nature of astral vigor
    Eurydice', accompany me in an infinite journey
    to phenomenal distances of spatial relativity
    embraced in lotus fields with beautiful daemons in the wind
    high and high as I transcend, so I turn to attend
    but upon thus, so superfluous she shy’s away
    the distance has caused a rift I cant erase.
    No embrace in direction of my fate I take
    Eurydice', you are demonic, what I thought I wanted
    but in efforts to achieve your levels, I am taunted
    what is my mind and body to do in such discourse?
    Wait once again in eclipse of the source
    or lament the loss thus shelled & porous?
    I feel I am nothing without her, contorted existence
    priceless to her nature, I persist with a vengeance
    a naked diligence to solve my vigilance
    Eurydice' the great, my Soul iridescence.
    Abruptly awaken to the lotus impressions
    I smile as it lingers with vulnerable slumber
    a dream of my love affair vivid in nature
    livid upon the spectator of angelic flavor.

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    SavVySam commented on The inevitable of lovers in dreams....

    04-14-2010

    "I’m the unseen in my dream, but she stares at me" The power in this perspective is the golden thread of this work...Nice!

    Altair

    04/14/2010

    Thank you so much sav, it is most appreciated

    Hampton commented on The inevitable of lovers in dreams....

    04-11-2010

    A somewhat surreal journey through a dream-scape of love. Well done.

    SuperChick76 commented on The inevitable of lovers in dreams....

    04-08-2010

    Damn, what a dream. haha. I love how you spell Daemons, been awhile since I've seen it spelled that way. I also noticed a love of yours for lotuses. Beautifully written poem, my friend. I truly enjoyed the read.

    knight4696 commented on The inevitable of lovers in dreams....

    04-08-2010

    Well Altair - This is both filled with sadness and a small gimpse of hope. I could feel your longing in this one - Emotions that run deep seem to make the best poems. Very nicely written - be strong my friend! Ken

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    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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