• Altair
  • Don't read me, I am not that good.......

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As such moments pass, drizzling blinks
rippling tidal waves amass my ink
I wish I had some more to drink
this lonely whisper makes me think.

The wind is howling, lovely storm
lightning flashes striking my arm
why do I care? no need for alarm
it's just a twitch in sentence form.

Dark is the sky's reticenct clouds
my reluctant stance in mimicked shroud
all that surround my hand is proud
I'm creating said paragraph, finished now.

I try not to talk of religion; why?
it's too complicated for us to surmise
Not sure why I brought that up; a disguise?
A cameo of lines carving such divides.

The house is sleeping, damn she's getting old
too many showers, and sun, I suppose
I should've wrote this on paper, perhaps in a prose
Nice ideas always trapped in my soul.

I'm getting sleepy, my restless mornings
yawning, eyes open in slumbering nothings
of the sort too frigid and haunting
her nonexistence is lame a thought formed.

Rambling wonders in wandering ripples
of the puddle I see in lieu of the drizzle
complete the night as the fire sizzles
Restless, no moor but I looks through this window.

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1990lh commented on Windows


See this is why I love you-I cant rock with poetry that doesn't make me feel something or invoke anything inside of me-it's like as soon as I started reading a calm mood washed over me-I was right there looking out that window too-early in the morning pondering about life and random shit-hahah. ((((((((altair))))))))))



Helllllll yea(((((((( nightmare!!!!!!!))))))) haha...thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you =)

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

Altair’s Poems (53)

Title Comments
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?....? 0
The Builder refused 0
To be my most recent thought 1
I've Said enough to Know 2
I've Said Enough to Mean 2
Just because I like Trees 2
Contemptuous Nonchalance 2
Unearthly Manifest... 2
Like Water for Dark Chocolate.... 2
Impenitent Soliloquy 3
Figurative Meadow... 1
Windows 1
In jam meant to be... 2
Upon My "Death" 5
The Butterfly Effect Set … 4
The Quiet Storm Enters A Room... 2
The Diamond Age of Yesternight..
A Choir of Angels are We in Poetry.... 10
Dear Love, by the time you manifest this poem, you'll be gone..... 10
On Hallows Eve, Hollow grief as Death I Foresee......
From blood, death darkens to stone's manifest.....
The Forest is a Journey In my Darkness complete.... 10
The Wrath of My Titan Enlightenment
..whatever that is...
Failure of my trinity...lea
ked was in sanity.
A soul is loss....seeks an endless remorse.. 10
Madness exist in her gift..... 7
The London Show at the Tate's Estate.......
.Part two adieu
The London Show at the Tate's Estate.......
I'm Back.... 7
A Warped View of My Inner Sanctum...... 4
What do I see? What do you believe? 9
Lacking in Madness...... 14
Elemental portance in alchemic relevance.. 9
The Calamity of Conformity...
The Vicarious Rues..... 6
Within this Quill, manifest on the Canvas....Art 8
A Voiding thought is all I sought.... 4
Pushing away the loving Void....... 10
Vessels of ash, Souls thus passed... 4
The Infinite battle from Night to Light....... 5
Trick or treat in the Streets of hollowed teens..... 5
Untitled Breaths... 11
Kharon was the fairest of guides to my fruition.....
The inevitable of lovers in dreams.... 5
If I could trap you in my vigil.... 3
I emit my lah... 2
An instant revelation of… 7
The crossroads of..... 3
How things change in a moment..... 4
How Angels and Human Inclinations are One...... 5
Frailty begets Strength...C'
est la vie...
The conquest..... 11