A Prayer

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This is in addition to my previous poem, Not Happy.

A Prayer

Father please tell me what to do.
I have been lost, seeking for help.
I have tried, but have failed.
My patience has not renewed.
In fact, it has been lost from me.
Please guide me in my troubles.
I ache so much from trying to fight
this battle on my own
that I have no strength to endure
this trial no more.
You always said you would carry me,
help me through my trials.
Please- I need your strength now.
I am too weak to carry this burden
ALONE.
Your help I seek.

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redsalive commented on A Prayer

12-06-2013

His help is amazing and may you start seeing His love grace and mercy in your life.......... Feel His hand hear His words attend to His wisdom He wants to help you as you help yourself....... redbloodink

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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