Your Judgements

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    Your Judgements

    I bare myself to you,
    standing naked
    before your eyes-
    everything for you
    to assess,
    for you to judge.
    You look me over
    and set me
    as you will.
    This is how
    you expect me
    to be.
    No other way
    is acceptable
    and not for you
    to tolerate.
    This mold you try
    to set me in
    does not fit.
    These restrictions
    against mine self,
    pressing about
    to make me fit,
    but it will not be so.
    I cannot fit that mold.

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    jtlove commented on Your Judgements

    06-05-2010

    Then don't fit. Do your thing man. It's your choice anyway.

    poetheart87

    06/05/2010

    Your response is short, but direct. Thank you.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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