I see, I feel

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    For my daughter: who is learning life is absolutely wonderful.

    I see, I feel

    I see your smile,
    I see the light
    touch your eyes
    at your discovery.
    Every day-
    a new adventure
    for you.
    A new joy for me
    as I watch you explore.
    I never thought
    this would be so
    wonderful,
    yet so scary.
    Somehow we're linked
    able to feel
    each of your emotions.
    I feel your sadness,
    your hurt,
    your frustration-
    your happiness,
    each of your
    conquests,
    your pride.
    I see, I feel
    never wanting
    to part from
    this journey.

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    dirty1flavor commented on I see, I feel

    08-26-2009

    i got to gine it up you have something that's all your own in your poems keep delivering

    NurseGiggles commented on I see, I feel

    08-10-2009

    this is simple but touching. - a mother's love, am I right?

    poetheart87

    08/14/2009

    Absolutely, my baby is the complete light of my eye. I know it's so clich'e but I wouldn't be complete without her

    poetheart87

    08/14/2009

    Absolutely, my baby is the complete light of my eye. I know it's so clich'e but I wouldn't be complete without her

    poetheart87

    08/14/2009

    Absolutely, my baby is the complete light of my eye. I know it's so clich'e but I wouldn't be complete without her

    poetheart87

    08/14/2009

    Absolutely, my baby is the complete light of my eye. I know it's so clich'e but I wouldn't be complete without her

    poetheart87

    08/14/2009

    Absolutely, my baby is the complete light of my eye. I know it's so clich'e but I wouldn't be complete without her

    poetheart87

    08/14/2009

    Absolutely, my baby is the complete light of my eye. I know it's so clich'e but I wouldn't be complete without her

    poetheart87

    08/14/2009

    Absolutely, my baby is the complete light of my eye. I know it's so clich'e but I wouldn't be complete without her

    poetheart87

    08/14/2009

    Absolutely, my baby is the complete light of my eye. I know it's so clich'e but I wouldn't be complete without her

    poetheart87

    08/14/2009

    Absolutely, my baby is the complete light of my eye. I know it's so clich'e but I wouldn't be complete without her

    poetheart87

    08/14/2009

    Absolutely, my baby is the complete light of my eye. I know it's so clich'e but I wouldn't be complete without her

    poetheart87

    08/14/2009

    Absolutely, my baby is the complete light of my eye. I know it's so clich'e but I wouldn't be complete without her

    poetheart87

    08/14/2009

    Absolutely, my baby is the complete light of my eye. I know it's so clich'e but I wouldn't be complete without her

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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