Leaving

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    Leaving

    My love for you
    has disappeared,
    just like yours
    has for me.
    You tell me you
    despise me
    for pressuring you
    into marriage-
    I never did.
    If you felt so,
    you should have left
    before this
    hatred ate your heart up
    and left you with
    an empty, cold shell.
    Now, it has
     and my hatred
    for you
    has left me bitter.
    This relationship is
    going nowhere,
    it's a long, bleak road.
    I have made my mind up
    and you can watch
    my back for
    the very last time
    as I walk out the door
    and away from you.

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    redsalive commented on Leaving

    12-06-2013

    I could hear the door slam shut....... nice write and flow...... redbloodink

    dragongarcia commented on Leaving

    02-11-2012

    nice poem hun. shows emotion. great job keeep on writting, ur very talented

    ayyan commented on Leaving

    02-11-2012

    this is a very nice poem written by u. e are happy to read amd save this one in a book of memory

    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Leaving

    01-28-2012

    I like this poem, did you have any hold backs on which poetry I use foor the book? No worrries full credit to you:)

    StandingBear commented on Leaving

    01-24-2012

    A well written poem of heart wrenching love gone wrong.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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