Not so super

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    I wrote this when I first became a mother. I thought it was my job, to make everyone happy and forgot to take time out for myself.

    Not so super

    Making everybody else happy,
    forgetting the one
    who should be also.
    Stretching-
    trying to be super,
    collapsing under the pressure.

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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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