Betrayed

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    Betrayed

    This betrayal-
    marking
    my heart black-
    making me
    stone cold.
    The pain
    cutting into
    my heart-
    the blood
    seeping forth,
    spreading
    ever more
    outward.
    This ice-
    touching
    everyone
    I meet,
    turning them away.
    In the end,
    you are
    to blame
    for teaching
    me I cannot
    trust anyone,
    not even
    my Beloved-
    for you
    are the one
    that betrayed me
    and smashed my Heart.

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    MsKrystle commented on Betrayed

    08-28-2009

    Its so sad how one bad relationship can turn us away from love. I have felt this before too but I've decided to give love another chance. Dont let one bad seed ruin it for someone else. Good write

    thurst07 commented on Betrayed

    08-11-2009

    I like this one it's deep and honest of how you feel

    AngelaStylz78 commented on Betrayed

    07-08-2009

    Wow....this one too. I love the way you write!!!!!!

    poetheart87

    07/13/2009

    Thanks. It's nice to know someone else can relate to me.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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