Naked Love

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The curiously simple gesture towards healing between lovers and the vulnerability of this exchange is the most enticing experience for me. I attempted to capture that essence with "Naked Love".

Naked Love


 Lying naked
 In the dark
 Exposed 
 I saw your un-dressed heart
 Knowing my power 
 Feeling no shame
 Devout 
 Reaching out to heal your pain
 Smoothing scars 
 Removing hidden jars 
 Embraced 
 Hearts on wings flutter afar 
 Simple advance 
 Symbolic chance 
 Romance 
 Tender love dance 
 Brings complete expanse 
 -M. Jacobs

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countrypoet commented on Naked Love

02-24-2010

DanmartyJake, Thanks for sharing this most enjoyable powerfully sensual poem. The love and tenderness come through strongly in this very simple and beautiful poem. Terry

danmartyjake1

02/24/2010

thanks for your comments on" Naked Love". I appreciate your thoughts.

BringMeBullets commented on Naked Love

02-11-2010

This is wonderful. I love the "hearts on wings flutter afar." This is a beautiful write. I love it.

danmartyjake1

02/14/2010

Thanks again, It's inspiring to be an inspiration to other writers and I hope that is what my poems do. All the Best!

charles52 commented on Naked Love

01-18-2010

danmartyjake1: Great pace, moving me to the "complete expanse." Interesting way you write. Charles

danmartyjake1

01/19/2010

Charles, I am so thankful you are reading my poems and commenting on them. Thanks for your feedback.

ginga commented on Naked Love

01-12-2010

WOW! The rhyming is the main naked theme here. And the beebop kind of rhythm. Cool! ginga

danmartyjake1

01/13/2010

Thanks, for bringing that to my attention, now I will re-read to understand the beebop feel. TY

Madelynn commented on Naked Love

01-12-2010

Your work here makes my heart just thump alittle faster. You not only make a strong statement of passion, but also, of healing and love. This short little treasure, truely captures the essence of making love.-Maddi

danmartyjake1

01/13/2010

Thanks Maddi, I was afraid that because it loaded incorrectly on the site, that might hurt the chance of other poets reading it. Thanks for checking it out, looking past the form and commenting on it.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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