Rage

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    Poem Commentary

    An attempt to decompress, express and share in words what I feel sometimes at situations and people who have insatiable appetites for control and are envious of others so they rage.
    This is a healthy way to send it out and release it.

    Rage

    As my thoughts fly through the razored air

    As my heart slows to cry beyond your

    blind and wanton stare

    A simple aggression with a nudge of rejection

     Shows painfully, you don’t care

    Rage

    Lives in your reflection within its refutation

    As denunciation grows upon one, so fair

    Mysterious how fascination can quickly ripen and

    rot into invasion, you so carelessly dare

    Rage

    Irresponsible, incomprehendable and daunt

    Transgression, false accusation, empty negotiation

    Character assassination……

    Your sweetest rouse will not awaken or repair

    Rage

    Haunting fury, blowing ravenous frenzy

    Fuming rant and ageless envy

    Boiling wrath on an endless flurry

    Seething thunder  from turmoil deep under

    Your veil is thinning your temper beginning

    You have no where to go, save your ridiculous flare

    Put you in an early grave, so don’t go there

     

    -M. Jacobs

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    Artie commented on Rage

    12-03-2009

    This is a great piece!! The last stanza was my favorite - very powerful - we can all relate - 10 from me
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    danmartyjake1

    12/03/2009

    thanks so much Artie, where you been/Great to hear from you.

    icu2 commented on Rage

    12-03-2009

    This is a really well thought out, expressive rant. I love it and totally feel the rage. Very well done. Great poem.
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    danmartyjake1

    12/03/2009

    Thanks for reading and your comments

    danmartyjake1

    12/03/2009

    Thanks for reading and your comments

    stellar commented on Rage

    12-03-2009

    PErfect...! You catch the essence of rage...and i am to is enrage...Great write ^_^ v
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    danmartyjake1

    12/03/2009

    thanks so much for reading and your comments

    Marsink commented on Rage

    12-02-2009

    Rant Against Goading Expectations!!! What else is there to say of such a succinct and explosive piece? Thanks for sharing that which may not be a flattereing confession, but is common to all at one time or another.
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    danmartyjake1

    12/03/2009

    Def not a flattering emotion at all, but needs to be expressed to move on, thanks

    jademelissa74 commented on Rage

    12-02-2009

    ....how empty to deny the rage for living like some blinded sage and never once to voice the cry...are we loved or do they lie? Wow! This is an amzing write Ms. Jacobs! Simply poetic!
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    danmartyjake1

    12/03/2009

    thank you for reading it and for your encouragement

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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