A Journey To The Surface

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    A Journey To The Surface






    A Journey To The Surface

    1
    I feel helpless

    I feel hopeless

    I feel useless

    I feel free

    2
    I feel helpless
    Stagnant
    Invisible
    Silent

    I feel hopeless
    Lost
    Defeated
    Inadequate

    I feel useless
    Stupid
    Weak
    Broken

    I feel free
    Disconnected
    Fearless
    Unaffected

    3
    I feel helpless
    Stagnant as the world passes me by
    Invisible as they walk on me 
    Silent for none hear me scream

    I feel hopeless
    Lost within my own home
    Defeated by unanswered dreams
    Inadequate from never having stood

    I feel useless
    Stupid for the choices I've made
    Weakened from having never been tested
    Broken from allowing it to continue

    I feel free
    Disconnected from the common patterns
    Fearless to the consequences
    Unaffected by the scores who judge me



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    blackfootlady commented on A Journey To The Surface

    04-26-2012

    Not Bad Artie! I love the ending.So many are quick to judge and I always thought that it was Gods job.This write was a simple pleasure to read. TY for sharing.God Bless-Blackfootlady
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    Musicmynded1 commented on A Journey To The Surface

    04-25-2012

    Thee ol "Breakin' Through" to find that new... likin' the knowledge, likin' the write.
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    TearsOfInk commented on A Journey To The Surface

    04-24-2012

    I can not express how much I can relate to this, I really felt what you were trying and succeeded to convey, excellent
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    Embraced

    07/18/2012

    I couldn't agree with you more. ~E

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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