Against the Current (Space Prose)

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Against the Current (Space Prose)

After burners flame off.
the globe below spins slowly.
I must concentrate.

No coffee for me.
It reeks here
of caffeine delirium.

I need my G.P.S.
Light feathers from squared shoulders.
An easy repair.

Gloves in hand are veined.
The gristle read in pain.
Weightless to my thoughts of view.

Marco Polo they said.
Conquistadores as a rebel yell.
Nothing goes against the grain.

Ha, ashes falling from the drain.
Zaa begins to spin
desires as colors focus bring.

Tanks to load tanks to me.
Nar a vision from a Christmas tree.
A long breath to gather out world wings.

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knight4696 commented on Against the Current (Space Prose)

12-28-2009

Hmmm .. Grito this one had me thinking ... read it twice to catch the drift ... Very metaphoric visuals wrapped up in this. Love this style - I love poems that make me think! Great job! .... Ken

Grito

12/28/2009

It is a look out into the universe, a close universe, thasnk you for your excelkent review Ken!!!

tierra7 commented on Against the Current (Space Prose)

12-26-2009

Sir Grito, you are a mystic light...you breath so much life and beauty into your canvass's ...remarkably beautiful...all are extremely divine born... Namaste Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/27/2009

Gosh Tierra, please call me Grito or Ivan, hugs and much love to you!!!

WordSlinger commented on Against the Current (Space Prose)

10-14-2009

the last stanza is fantastic, one creative write, :)

Grito

10/14/2009

I'm glad you liked it, thank you most kind Words!!

Charlie23 commented on Against the Current (Space Prose)

10-14-2009

Seems your flying above the world here! Seems to be a different kind of travel! I like this one!

Grito

10/14/2009

The music of Ha Ash, Charlie Zaa and Marc Anthony are here too, thank you kind Charlie!!!

jademelissa74 commented on Against the Current (Space Prose)

10-01-2009

Every true man, who is a little above the level of the sea and walks forth with his head up high, lives so as to give a meaning and a value to anything. Your words are always captivating, original and sharp. You will always have my undivided attention. Aixa is so right about the original way in which you sing passionately :) Great job amigo mio!

Grito

10/01/2009

Hola Jade!!! I have'nt seen you around much lately, as always it is great to have you visit and to read your moving thoughts, RUCA!!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Is 7
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