Storm

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Storm

Happily, 
I gave to you my she,
whom my life lights,   
the touch of a white rose
in the shape of a pure kiss
to the treasure of your lips
in the early mornings' ecstasy
and in the twilight of our nights. 
 
And as you did divine
my love I gave to you a kiss,
to assure you that yes
you are my want and mine. 
 
Such passed the days
and all those years
until God caused my life to mist,
and called my soul to its final rest,
in the redolent mystic remedies
of a storm of white petals. 
 
Aah, then my
love of loves,
I learned that day,
in that fall of those flowered drops,
as I was covered by the innumerable kisses
of the odorous rain, that they are us. 
 
For in the grace of the petals
I felt your mouth in the infinity of flowers,
and found on the fragrant lips
of the stormy drops,
the white roses
of our happiness. 
 

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StandingBear commented on Storm

01-30-2010

The sweet, passionate embrace of romanticism and love showered by rain and flower petals in an everlasting commitment. Great! Thanks grito for your vote per my poem : The Final decisions per week 4 of the survivor contest. This is the actual January Poet Of The Month winner though not recognized.

knight4696 commented on Storm

12-27-2009

Wow Grito - Very Very romantic write! Love the emotions and imagery - very deep and heartfelt ... Great Job my friend! :) Ken

Grito

12/28/2009

Woman, isn't she the greatest Ken!!!

tierra7 commented on Storm

12-26-2009

oh my ...Sir Grito....this had me mesmerized from the beginnin'.....i'm still..transformin' to self mode...Namaste...Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/27/2009

Life and love as a petal, thank you for your excellent review kind Tierra!!

dahlusion commented on Storm

10-15-2009

So much intense passion displayed with poetic excellence: "For in the grace of the petals I felt your mouth in the infinity of flowers" — this line is a poetic victory!

Grito

10/15/2009

Your great review makes me think that we are kindred spirits Dah, thank you very much!!!

WordSlinger commented on Storm

10-14-2009

wow, the power of love, nice, I see that you also, are love stucken, cool stuff huh, love it my new friend.....

Grito

10/14/2009

yeah, I am a romantic, mostly, it is cool stuff, thamk you for your kind words and visit Words!!!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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