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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Return

When I see
that the waves,
without fear, 
approach the shore, 
I know they arrive
that they caress,
and then they
go. 

The waves arrive
they caress
and then they go.

And in the rhythm
of their motive,
in their wandering
they always return
with all their senses,
to demonstrate,
all the longing
their tide's entail.

Yes the waves continue
this immortal encounter 
freed by their desire 
that is inspired by your
enchantingly beautiful
earth coast to sail.

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bloomingsun commented on Return

12-28-2009

The images and construction of this are so appealing. I love the waves, the constancy of their motion, the certainty of their return. Love it. Great write...

Grito

12/28/2009

Thank you very much for your excellent review kind Blooming!!

knight4696 commented on Return

12-28-2009

VERY NICE!!! :) The allure of the ocean is captured so beautifully in this piece. Very Nice indeed! Great Job! ... Ken

Grito

12/28/2009

Thank you for the excellent rebview andvisit Sir Ken!!!

tierra7 commented on Return

12-28-2009

Oooooh i love this piece....i love the water...the connection is soooo calmin'...oh Grito...ty for the beauty you paint here...for us... .nice to watch the water waves up close and at a distance.....soooo nice to become a part of the ocean...and to have the ocean wash over us..Namaste...Terra@}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/28/2009

It is in the grace of the water dear tierra, thank you very much for your excellent review!!

dancinghawk commented on Return

10-15-2009

attentive ... respectful ... cleansing ... constant ... much to learn from the deep waters, certainly ... love this portrait/metaphor of the shore-waters as an attendant, a "fan," an appreciative lover holding precious ... and the repetition of the second stanza is perfect, emphasizing, clarifying ...

Grito

10/15/2009

Like most writing, it is held together, tied to, and accompanied by the music spirits create, thank you kind Dancing!!!

AIXA commented on Return

10-05-2009

There is a connection between water and sensuality. Beautiful piece. Love endure promises of our dream..

Grito

10/05/2009

Neverending dearest!!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
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Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
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Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
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Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
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2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
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2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
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Fruit 1
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Puma 0
Flux 0
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Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
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Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
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Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
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I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
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Seed 8
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White 10
She 6
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