Letter

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Letter

In the very beginning
I was a clear single letter
and was nurtured by eternity's breath.

Patient time and dimension added 
snowfall as a syllable and a sentence,
the lamb of love was faith.

Aah, humanity and the world extended
and organized each particled chapter,
the blue sky and the damp earth book.

Life in a Snow Crane's dance of rings with death.
Hope funded in the power of the Alpha
and the cherry blossom favor of the Omega.

Now in the mystery of my penitence,
I thank the indulgent North Star and look
to be a cosmic letter in the ending.

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Marsink commented on Letter

01-08-2010

Very wonderfully creative perspective and originality. A somber beauty of eternity unfolding, holding hope to mortality and men.

Grito

01/11/2010

I found peace in acceptance, thank you very much for your understanding review kind Marsink!!

WordSlinger commented on Letter

01-01-2010

I love it, had to read again, I have a new musical, (In Flesh Under The Mexican Moon)) Happy New Year!!!! WS

Grito

01/01/2010

A great compliment that you re-read, thank you very much!!!

tierra7 commented on Letter

12-23-2009

Sir Grito,...this is authentically a master piece... your talent on this shows the kindness of your character...the beauty of your soul...and the love you have within your heart...and i hope in turn you know that your words are of a deep inspiration, ~sigh~ so much beauty in them ...so much beauty... Happy Holidays.....Namaste..Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/23/2009

I am most flattered and gratified by your most excellent review kind Tierra, thank you soo very much!!!

jademelissa74 commented on Letter

12-22-2009

"Oh Lord, you have been our dwelling place through all generations. Before the mountains were brought forth or ever you did form the heavens and the earth, even from everlasting to everlasting...You are God!" Yes! Yes! Ivan, you always manage to craft powerful and meaningful pieces. To be a part of the immense universe is something to long for. The way in which you mingle nature, faith and love is simply PRICELESS!!!! This is a lovely, remarkable poem!

Grito

12/22/2009

Please Jade, you are making me cry!

jademelissa74

12/22/2009

Sorry :( I didn't mean to...LOL! Merry Christmas to you and Aixa Ivan! :))

jademelissa74

12/22/2009

Sorry :( I didn't mean to...LOL! Merry Christmas to you and Aixa Ivan! :))

Grito

12/22/2009

Peace and love to you dear Jade!!!

danmartyjake1 commented on Letter

12-21-2009

Thanks for sharing this lovely and masterful prose you have created so beautifully.

Grito

12/21/2009

Hi DMJ!!! Thank you very much for your most gracious review, MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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