Time

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Time

We walk

in the autumn hug of the sun along

the Sunday dressed throng,

it is September in Battery Park.


Beside your laugh the Hudson river bends,

its waters deep and dark,

along the harbor moorings

inevitably it  goes.

Like time it never ends,

and my thoughts of you it tows.


Sea Cruise deep channel's 

sailboat early mornings

stir starboard as she murmurs,

Her sunhat competes 

and, by their shrill whistles,

they move through the shade of the trees,

a parasol to accompany the rustles

in a grey glove tug of sighs 

from  your summer dress.


It is where we

are meant to be
and in the space between the leaves,

brilliant with your body's perfume scent,

I find what we have become and we will always be

and that the river eddies represent

our talk is lighted by divinity.

 

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tierra7 commented on Time

12-28-2009

oh how romantic.....the love spilled out on this is priceless...such a warm embrace i received from this .. i felt two hearts fused beatin' as one...you are both so blessed...to have found one another...when one is in love...a heart is the most beautiful place to live.....someday when i grow up i will go there ~smile~..........again.......Namaste... Terra @}-'-,- (100 +) psssssst i rated this poem 10x...oh how i wish...we could........ )

Grito

12/29/2009

A precious place to me dear Tierra, thank you very much for your excellent review!!!

knight4696 commented on Time

12-28-2009

Awesome! Love the romance in this! Ingrid is one lucky lady to have found a man who can express himself so freely and honestly ... A true poet and romantic you are. Great job! ...Ken

Grito

12/28/2009

Thank you for your good sentiments Ken, I know I an honored to have her as my wife.

WordSlinger commented on Time

10-17-2009

One good poem, detailed perfection, took me to the place, masterful.....

Grito

10/17/2009

Thank you very much for your most excellent review!!

AIXA commented on Time

09-26-2009

There is a magic place to be, which inspires the whole word, the most famous artists, freedom by the Statue, surrounded by buildings ot two towers of power and the only thing left is a flower, Battery Park in Manhattan where we falled in love, near the river, with the sailing boats which I adore.

Grito

09/26/2009

En cuentos se asoman los encuentros.

gogant commented on Time

09-25-2009

They say that talk is cheap -- ah, but here we have a million dollar baby. Nicely done my man....................................gogant

Grito

09/25/2009

LOL!! Thanks alot for the visit gogant!!!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
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Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
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See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
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Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
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Two 1
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Malla 1
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Stars 2
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Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
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Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
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Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
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Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
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Shore 2
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Ice(Senyru) 3
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Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
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Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
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Dias 1
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Embrace(Senyr
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Celestial(Cin
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