Rapture

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Rapture

Her picture,
shows her eyes allure,
her smile is still
my rapture.
In twilight frost,
her presence there all
framed in sterling silver,
to hold me now as colors are lost,
yet gentle is her promise.
I find her here
when I need her near,
when her I miss,
for she my soul does capture.


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tierra7 commented on Rapture

12-23-2009

O h My Grito, you capture so much of your energy upon your canvass...such a serene write..i can feel the softness of a breath...Lovely...very Lovely....tis nice...to have the love of your life's soul share with the eyes of the heart...you are soooo Blessed !! ~sigh~ totally priceless....Namaste..Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/23/2009

Thank you very much sweet Tierra, and blessings to you too!!!

knight4696 commented on Rapture

11-16-2009

The simplicity of this poem is fantastic. So simple that it makes it a joy to read - an easy flowing tribute to you're loved one. Great write Grito! Ken

Grito

11/16/2009

Thank you very much Ken, I like to write short poems!!

dancinghawk commented on Rapture

10-15-2009

my favorite thing about this piece ... is that you keep to the universal ... "Her picture" is as concrete as it gets ... and from there, this speaks to all, for who doesn't have such a picture, and such a frame? hair color - not important; "gentle is her / promise." - important :) thx for another beautiful post!

Grito

10/15/2009

Universal love, thank you for your excellent review and visit gracious Dancing hawk!!!

mdpoetgirl commented on Rapture

10-01-2009

Aw, so touching... beautifully written. I feel the love...

Grito

10/01/2009

THank you very much for your great review kind mdpoetgirl!!!

danmartyjake1 commented on Rapture

09-06-2009

this is beautiful and simple... I really like it........great stuff!

Grito

09/06/2009

Great words to read, thank you most kind MJ!!!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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