Away

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  • Allegory
    • Grito
    • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

    Away

    What can I say
    when the heavens dare
    to leave a scar
    this springtime eve
    when they perceive,
    that I looked away.

    They make me pay
    as their falling star
    is tossed away
    without a care.

    Black saddle hung,
    home flag displayed.
    A drum roll fraught,
    drawn and slow sung,
    in the dirge parade
    of what the star has taught.

    The lost star's end,
    it's pearl dust glory,
    salves my discord,
    seems to unhinge
    and then record
    this night too long,
    too solemn and
    so wrong
    so I pray to spend
    this misery,
    to say I'm sorry,
    that I want revenge.

    The clock winds down,
    the chains not heard,
    in it's green and brown,
    without a word,
    as if to say
    it knows my mind has gone astray.

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    AIXA commented on Away

    04-23-2009

    the star will be there for you...

    dahlusion commented on Away

    04-21-2009

    A perfect surrealist ride through life's beautiful illusions.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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    Is 7
    Quarks 5
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