• Grito
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Axia, mi aire.

Air

The music spins
if but to see
in the sugar and the
salt the primeval
lasso
thinness
of the tie
 between good and evil. 

For if we go, 
as one sentient being,
the two to free 
the hug of the red dress, 
in the strong
body of your memory,
we shall be living, 
a bouy anchored in the joy,
encouraged by the eyes
in the vein of our song
strung to the tug of your lashes
where there is no
 turn not lifted by
the light from the sky. 

You are the reason, 
 we are made pure, 
forged by the force
of the sun,
 held close in the nurture,
  the mother source,
that has taught us desire. 

Yes I see, 
 as  you dream, 
our song
is sung by the trance 
of the strum
that holds the
 hum of romance, 
 made strong
as we dance. 

To me you give 
  ease from my agony.
the sky has spun
  the reason,
for which I live.

You are the air,
 a haunting melody.
Your graceful symphony,
caught close to the nape of your hair,
 in step we share.
 

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jademelissa74 commented on Air

07-08-2009

Ahhh, so poetically rich. The vivid expression of your words send shivers down my spine. You always manage to convey your sincere feeling for Aixa in such an eloquent way. This poems opens my imagination to go beyond the words read! Thank you!

Grito

07/08/2009

Always a pleasure to have you here dear Jaded!! Thought of my best on a breeze.

JadedJezzabel commented on Air

07-05-2009

the visual way you expressed your love and deep attraction had me seeing the swish of her red dress and feeling the contintment you have found in the commintment of the step you share a 10 and a favorite.

Grito

07/06/2009

Jaded, I love your review, thank you very nuch!!!

optimistic commented on Air

07-05-2009

These words had me lost out in the air, lost in the wind of these blowing words tossed acrossed the page lightly shimmered with words of sweet love for the air.

Grito

07/05/2009

Gosh optimistic, I am flattered and very much appreciate your flowing commment! God bless!!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Grito’s Poems (148)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Luz (De los Andes) ® 13
Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
.J.B. (Prose) ©
5
Blue Inca Night (Verse) 38
Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
Feather(AIXA) 4
Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
)
2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
)
2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
ain)
1
Fruit 1
Form 0
Puma 0
Flux 0
Esperandote 1
Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
American Rose 4
Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
quain)
2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
World's Play (Words Splay) 5
Risas 4
White 10
She 6
Cream 5
Day 5
Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
Bosom 6
Safe 5
Rapture 8
Mirage 7
Canto(Spanish
)
5
Lips 14
Cresent Moon(Prose) 12
Ferns 6
Drops 10
Pass(Verse) 5
Snow Flakes(Prose) 6
Shell 11
Play 12