Shell

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    • Grito
    • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

    Shell

    As


    a smooth shell
    curves
    to a pearl display,

    therein I dwell
    within the swerves
    of her red lips play.

    They draw me close
    and to my dismay
    I know what I must say.

    In her svelte repose
    she does affirm
    my need to pray.

    The good Lord knows,
    he does confirm,
    my thanks to him for her today.

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    Rhymer commented on Shell

    12-25-2009

    I like your style you are quickly becoming one of my favorites on these boards. 10 from me.

    Grito

    12/25/2009

    good

    Grito

    12/25/2009

    And I like your review very much goog Rhymer, thank you!!!

    tierra7 commented on Shell

    12-23-2009

    Beautifully ! absolutely an exquisite write!! thank you for sharin'... Namaste ...Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

    Grito

    12/23/2009

    I am very glad that you liked it Tierra, thank you very much for your review and visit!!

    AIXA commented on Shell

    12-04-2009

    Enamorada de colores de suspiros y sabores, remarcando en mi vida, es mi alma que a ti suspira, es por ti a quien mira y hacia ti, a quien se inclina. You are in my life, like magic fireworks!!! Amor para ti, AIXA

    Grito

    12/04/2009

    Abrazos y amor mi vida!!!

    knight4696 commented on Shell

    11-16-2009

    Another beautiful and sensous sentiment. The imagery, once again is superb. You certainlly can capture the essense of love and convey it so well with very few words. Great Job Grito! Ken

    Grito

    11/16/2009

    Thank you veru much Ken, I guess you see that I am primarily a romantic!

    dancinghawk commented on Shell

    11-04-2009

    LOL ... i really did ... and lovely ... very nice ... -dh

    Grito

    11/05/2009

    So good to hear, thank you very much DH!!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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