• Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Lips

The sun draws closer

as it turns,

her eyes to melt me
 
into embers,

her passion swelling

leaves no cinders,

her lips leave petal prints

as my skin burns.


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tierra7 commented on Lips

12-23-2009

B E A U T I F U L !!! Sir Grito. this is absolutely Fabulous...these few words leave an imprint of Desire.. I like..!! Namaste.. Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/23/2009

Ahh, it is the magic of the Sun!!!

Karma885 commented on Lips

11-04-2009

DAMN NICE POEM SHORT BUT ITS NICE I GOT APICTUE IN MY HEAD OF THIS POEM ..IT GETS A10. READN MINE AND COMMENT BACK

Grito

11/04/2009

Hi Karma, sure will, thanks!

FindingJune commented on Lips

11-03-2009

Yes. That. I feel as if I've just kissed you...and I want more!

Grito

11/03/2009

You have just kissed me and it is not lacking in any way!!

wordCollective commented on Lips

10-21-2009

my lips are tingling!...lol Where can i buy one of you?

Grito

10/21/2009

Gosh Word collective, your review has to be the best one I ever got!!! Thank you and a million hugs sweetie!!

jademelissa74 commented on Lips

07-19-2009

Simplemente Perfecto! Ahhhhh, the peace within reaches my inner soul. Me encanta leer tu corazon! Gracias!

Grito

07/20/2009

Es siempre un placer ver que has visitado Jade. Pero deveras, tengo cicatrices en forma de petálos como prueba!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

Grito’s Poems (148)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Luz (De los Andes) ® 13
Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
.J.B. (Prose) ©
5
Blue Inca Night (Verse) 38
Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
Feather(AIXA) 4
Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
)
2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
)
2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
ain)
1
Fruit 1
Form 0
Puma 0
Flux 0
Esperandote 1
Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
American Rose 4
Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
quain)
2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
World's Play (Words Splay) 5
Risas 4
White 10
She 6
Cream 5
Day 5
Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
Bosom 6
Safe 5
Rapture 8
Mirage 7
Canto(Spanish
)
5
Lips 14
Cresent Moon(Prose) 12
Ferns 6
Drops 10
Pass(Verse) 5
Snow Flakes(Prose) 6
Shell 11
Play 12