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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Carousel

You are in the air,
I know as I feel
the slip of your waist,
as it breathes me in.
The red beat
of your breast,
awakens the eve's heat
as it fervently dissipates
sighs from my every cell,
and melts your caress as it touches
my skin,
this I know well.
 
Your air moves me to see,
the sound of your laughter arose
a fresh wind to set free
white rose blossoms from the pause
of the curve of your hips,
as liquid senses to purify the throes
that are at the cause
of where my emotions dwell.
I am inside your lips,
and under your spell.
You are my fair breeze
at this summer's carousel.
 

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tierra7 commented on Carousel

12-29-2009

this is fabulous..! we have a carousel here at one of our malls and i love it...your poem makes it much more appreciated... thumbs up ! Namaste ...Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/30/2009

They are so much fun, thank you Tierra!!!

nightsky commented on Carousel

08-22-2009

I like this a lot...you can feel energies merge into each other. :)

Grito

08/22/2009

Thank you kind Nightsky!!

Strider commented on Carousel

08-12-2009

I am inside your lips and under your spell, I read that line over and over again. This is a wonderful piece.

Grito

08/12/2009

Thank you very much Strider!!

AIXA commented on Carousel

08-10-2009

Very tempting, brings everyone's desires to feel their world of their imagination... to your erotic world. Hmmmm.

Grito

08/10/2009

A new experiment for me dear loved one, thank you very much!!!

jademelissa74 commented on Carousel

08-10-2009

The arrangement of magical phrases is simply delightful. It is vividly offered and gratifying. You do not cease to amaze me with every ounce of passion that you possess. Well written piece.

Grito

08/10/2009

It is great to read your wonderful review kind Jade, thank you very much!!!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Grito’s Poems (148)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Luz (De los Andes) ® 13
Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
.J.B. (Prose) ©
5
Blue Inca Night (Verse) 38
Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
Feather(AIXA) 4
Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
)
2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
)
2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
ain)
1
Fruit 1
Form 0
Puma 0
Flux 0
Esperandote 1
Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
American Rose 4
Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
quain)
2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
World's Play (Words Splay) 5
Risas 4
White 10
She 6
Cream 5
Day 5
Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
Bosom 6
Safe 5
Rapture 8
Mirage 7
Canto(Spanish
)
5
Lips 14
Cresent Moon(Prose) 12
Ferns 6
Drops 10
Pass(Verse) 5
Snow Flakes(Prose) 6
Shell 11
Play 12